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Still I Try
Title: Still I Try
By: Chris Stylez a.k.a. Young Dolla Crew: Trigga Town Inc. [Chris Stylez](hook 2x) Still I try in my life Not to Rely by the gun by myside In my mind diminish the signs That I just might die to night And Pry my life remains mine [Chris Stylez] Still contemplatin, to remain waitin, on choosing my final destination Penetration on my mediation on the events that happen in our nation Frantic as hope diminish in our eyes, replaced by the fear that reside Deep inside, we hope we all die, quickly so we dont feel pain of life Not realizing the quick pain of death, remain on the ones who left Not being able to say goodbye to loved one, gone to fast by the gun We really loose when we kill the opposition, the battle can't be won When killin is our mission, of an ambition women and stacks tens Cuz our ambition grows from them stacks of tens to twenties We all rap cash aint thing, but yet we still kill for money Drenched in blood, our green turns to red from the bullet the in head Runnin knee deep in mud, just to see our family rest in beds and fed Thats all it all start, then our basis gets lost in the rapture Disaster becomes our master, taking orders from wicked laughters Not knowing who we follow after, Proceed to play on like the actors In play of life, taking it recklessly with out thinking twice, No wonder we live in darkness, cuz so many fail to see the light [Chris Stylez](hook 2x) Still I try in my life Not to Rely by the gun by myside In my mind diminish the signs That I just might die to night And Pry my life remains mine [Chris Stylez] Darkest memories of me squeezin triggers, as i do the same to my eyes Not sure when I was bustin, I was severing all his family ties Doing it to survive is a lie, could of been different if tried tried Didn't really understand the meaning, till a month later when it rained You feel the pain, when your responsible for the slain, emotions run like a train Self-destruction start upon your body till there's nothin that remains Feeling the need of weed, inhaling the fumes of doom, symbolizes drugs as a broom Compressin unwanted thoughts for room for the new,hoping memories dont renew In the avenue of memory lane, tired of playing games with my own brain Driving myself to kill my membranes, with a nostril full of cocaine Laced with this, Laced with that, Struggling not to resort to crack Memory relapse as i collapse, helpless to back track back on the map As these visions course threw my mind, Like a time line to better to define All i see is my past and misery, that my decisions have given me Destiny has chosen me to be blind by the choices that I drag behind Sweat drippin to my eyes,stingin sensation helping me to see my own demise [Chris Stylez](hook 2x) Still I try in my life Not to Rely by the gun by myside In my mind diminish the signs That I just might die to night And Pry my life remains mine [Chris Stylez] So many hate not being loved, but still remain to love to hate Being hypocritical towards the one that walk their same fate Traveling from home to home, attempting to find a family to own Only to push away their loved ones, finding themselves to be alone The reckless remain to say, suicide dont ever cross their mind Committing these mindless actions, disguised as self homicide The public try to see how we think the unthinkable like it's simple Defeat the unbeatable, beat the undefeatable, with out stable principles Using our insanity to slickly be embraced by humanity, with unorthodox tactics using mathematics as schematics, to live life to highest while once an antic Provoking the worlds anger, being addicted to danger, cuz success is no stranger You know you made the enemy fail its ultimate feat, by proving your not weak By staying strong in the moment, by not selfishly destroying the streets But its a shame how we get caught up too deep in our hatred So deep that we can't even look back up to our basis Facing the fact, that when we succeed on a different map That it's hard to see the route on getting back, on the right track So addicted to evil in life but..... [Chris Stylez] Still I try in my life Not to Rely by the gun by myside In my mind diminsh the signs That I just might die to night And Pry my life remains mine |
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uppin............come on dont sleep
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hahaha not one reply on this shit and its been up this long?
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Good Flow, I thought it was decent.... I didnt finish it though it was too long but what I read was good, record this man....Keep it ^
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Good flow it was alright ! It was long lol~
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shits pretty deep bro i like what u were gettin at but there comes a point when it seems like ur trying a lil to hard to be all philosophical and shit but fuk if thats how u feel lay that shit down....as long as you get out wat ur trying to say thats all that matters get yah point across how u fell is best....as for how i think you should get it across goes like this trim it down sum try not to force so many lines and you'll be all good keep droppin..amd remember constant elevation is keeeeeeeyyyyy!
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didnt finish reading it all,but i liked most of wot i read.bit 2 long but liked ya flow,it was abit deep+stretched,so it was hard 2 stay fully focused on wot i was reading at times.not bad tho 7-7.5/10.peace
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wow...I havent read these in so long. Some potential. Hhaaha I might turn these into tracks.hahaha And lol at no one responding to these in over a year. Good look on the feed yall
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This is interesting.....you had a lot of good concepts....they just wern't delivered that well...i don't know if this is an old piece or not...but this was a decent piece...that could have been really dope had you been a more seasoned writer....keep at it....you've either got mad potential or have gotten a lot better.....i really believe that
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Yeah I have gotten alot better. Now that i left text alone and know how to word things better since im actually rhyming word for word. Shit is literally two years old
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Honestly, this was a really well put together peice and much better than most of the other stuff regularly put out on RV.
So many hate not being loved, but still remain to love to hate Being hypocritical towards the one that walk their same fate For some reason that stuck out to me, extremely. The flow and structure was on point, but it was already mentioned i think but it did seem as if sometimes you seemed to try to be mor edeep and poetic which is good for potential but it doesnt really work if your obvious about it. overall though great peice. Respond to my open mics bro and keep dropping |
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