Artikulate - Keep It Real
 

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Threw some of my ancient text together wit some new sh*t I wrote and this is the product.

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=3729101

uppppiiiiinnnnnnn

Playing...
beats popping alot while playing, vocal levels are good, rhymes and flow are decent. Still alot of pops through out it.
decent mixing on this track

upppinnnnn.....

I hate long intros...


beat is 90s-ish = not bad

ur vocal quality was good

flow was on beat...but one step short from being "on point"...too simple for that...you rhyming was stock = acceptable, if not unexciting

Socom line reminded me of my man Cho...haaa...NAVY...good line


short, but not bad



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Ay I got a mixtape droppin April 18th, if anybody wanna collab wit me get at me on AIM - Artikul4te

hmmmmmmmm


awww shit....the big L beat....sickness bro....not a bad some in...i mighta upped the emotion a bit....and delevery is lacking..."pick up a tree" was too simple....flows straight..dubs r a bit loud...table scrap line was iight...socom line was good....should not have left the beat open like this...it might get jacked LOL..i ben wanting this beat too yo