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He's Back Wit Anotha One!!!!*black Jekyll & Hyde*peep It!!!!!!!!
Whaddup yall, this a new joint from da kid peep it, enjoy it, leave sum good detailed feed.........1
Song Title: Black Jekyll & Hyde Link to song: http://www.soundclick.com/triplen Links to Previous Feed Left: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=225279 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=225465 http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2708368 |
Haven't peeped your shit in a minute man.....
Beat's cool so far. Your hook in the beginning sounded a little too wet......I think I'm using the right terminology. lol. Your verse is sounding a little wet too. You got a flow like SPuL on this one....lol. I guess maybe this is a beat I could hear him on. This could be a good ass mainstream song man. I could definitely see this on heavy rotation as like, your promotion song......what you would use to get on the radios and video and shit. Not really feeling the flow on the last verse too much though. Atleast in the beginning. Toward the end you went back to the trademark Triple N flow for a bar or two. Nice track though man :thumbup:™ |
thanks alot fam..appreciate the feed man.....1
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aiight peepin...
beat sounding a lil funky. lol like the singing..... hook sound tight..... lmao @ jesus part in song. rofl..... gretky line haha....... delivery good, nice flow..... good verse overall.. like how you switched up flow on this verse.... dope multis....lmao @ 50 photographer... another good verse....... hook again.... like the adlibs lol rape your mom fix her sandwich. loool haha.... like how you changed your voice on this one, fit the lines....... lol good shit again overall, I can tell you had a lot of fun makin' this shit. just fuckin' around and shit. i enjoyed it yo. def bump again. lol beat fit lyrics perfectly. dope shit man. keep it up.... 9.5/10 |
*listenin* beat is decent....... synths are aight, but sumtimes they start soundin to repetitive
decent hook, i love how u always got the good emotion, most people are way too busy tryna say the raps and flowin it........ pretty nice verse, nice mixin on that lil break with the person talkin about how u sed jesus lol, kinda funny hook..... this shit is pretty good right now, but its like a club trakc, but not one at the same time....... tyson fans lose ur bets...... hah the beginnin of third verse sounds weird and ur real messin around lmao..... stir crazy.... u almost havin alil too much fun on this verse.... lmao, it kinda seemes like some Eminem "Rain Man" shit with the last verse but with alot better verses decent shit, but i like ur more serious shit alil more..... please RTF, u give the best feed and i really wanna know wat u think about this track: http://community.rapverse.com/showt...18&page=1&pp=15 |
the beat was funky.....liked it........lyrics matched it good ........pucnelines were kool..............overall pretty good....liked it ...........
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aight nigga..
beat isnt really my style..chorus is straight to me i like the mixin on it... the first verse is good i like the punchlines in there yo.. second verse is full wit punches again..like the flow on this one and the first too... third verse is good too the flow and the lyrics was on point.. this was a good track but its just not my style nah mean..a lil too clubby for me.. its good for the radio tho |
*listening*
Beat starts off good... your flow is smoth i like the way you spitin this. really liking the beat towards the middle of this.. your vocals are solid and your. this has a nice feel to it the second verse is the part i like the best. your flow on your last was a little off but other then that your flow was onpoint along with everything else.. good to see you dropping shit on here again... GET ACTIVE WILL YA |
Good, I thought you had left lol...Ight...Listenin my nigga:
beat is nice, reminds me summin dat bizzare or eminem might of used...haha i this hook is sick...im feelin it..you mixed it nicely...haha jesus line was sick...damn..these lyrics are crazy...this def summin im boppin too...hook is watsup..this is a dope hook..that two faced nigggaaa..hha...lol at nic cannon line..flow is good real dope..you didnt fall off...delivery is tha best thats come outta rv so dats still there..and quality is studio...what mic u got?...and u def do know how to make a good joint speically with the way you deliverin and the hook...haha at 3rd verse...lovin these lyrics...haha hook again this is whatsup..you know ive already downloaded..*listens again* http://community.rapverse.com/showt...719#post2708719 can you rtf? |
This would have to be one of my favorites by you, your flow so just different lol... This the most diverse track I heard by you... the delivery was on point.
My favorite line was the Christina Milian line, i laughed at that point. 3rd verse - You wylin' out fa real... Stir Crazy haha you were tweekin hard on that third verse... overall a nice fun track, and this sounds like the best quality in my opinion. The hook sounds real good, I listened to this like 3 times already. Next time leave the cabbage alone. Good work, 1. |
Props on all the feedback yall its much appreciated.........1
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ooh deffinitly feelin this my nig chorus was butter...you gettin sicker on choruses
loool the clip was funny..of jesus..hahaha flow was nice...man all verses were cool presence i was feelin it... |
Yea i like this track, I don't care what others say i like the fact that you attempted it with tge hilarious lyrics. the beat is dope and shit but you delivered quite nice. the flow was pretty strong and the hook was catchy. not your best of work but I feel you did a nice job with it trip. You'll always make tracks people will bump but not always will just 1 person like them but I feel pretty much everything you do man. overall I liked your song man.
mind if you could rtf here: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=225805 |
WACKY ass beat bro.....chorus is hot...the mixing is great...."dumb ass" lol...flow come in nice....the ohhhhhh was funny too...well put togethor...barkly line nice...emotion a delevry is superb...sholder tap line was nice....":they like nahh" lol nice man...is nice how u stay on topic n shit..a actual song appose to jus spittin...samich lol...why u wana take my cookies yo??
lol nice shit tho... RTF if ya will http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=225406 |
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the creativity on the hook...and it's mixed well Delivery is good Flow is good, but stock What's not: the beat is too cartoon-ish sounding for me hmm...anything else and I'd be nitpicking Overall: solid track 1 |
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