Controlled Violence...soldier boy!...holla atcha boy!!!!!!!!!!!
 

http://www.soundclick.com/qakaprox

^^Click on "Controlled Violence...soldier boy!"


Beat: Apelo Productionz

Hook: Built in with the beat "soldier boy"

Verses: 1 and 2, Tha Q




Holla

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nice beat....lol @ u still doin the my name shit

good come in...flows goodness,"basicly" yea got the big flow

nice multis in the ether line,lol thx for the shout out..lol @ bleepin this out

nicly writtin man..to true to man

nice ass track bro

1nE

sounds nice...might need a hook, over the soldier boy part....to me it feels like its missing sumtin....good song tho...lyrics n shit are straight

preciate the feedback








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Listenin, lol yay the my name is tha q is back...im like the dmx samples up in there...beat is real gangsta and im feelin it...feelin the multis and how u came in...lyrics are good...multis are pretty crazy over here...and flow is pretty sick...delivery is gettin real hot..this is a dope mixtape track..and I think you should consider addin' to tha hook give it dat well rouned feel....9/10...

^^Preciate it

I actually considered rapping over the hook, but chose to leave it as is. I might do another one and do the hook over.



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Word u should try dat would sound fresh...get at me fam...1

^^^ehhh...I listened again and decided it was fine the way it is.





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I think you could have lowered the volume on the "My name iiiiiissssssss Tha Q" part, but the rest is nice. You got a really nice flow/rhyme scheme man. Honest :thumbup:™

PS....thanks for the shout out :D

^^Preciate da feed










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eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeer up