I Want It All (leave Links I'll Rtf Asap)
 

new track on the soundclick page

www.soundclick.com/eastsyde




http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=224618

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=225534


i appreciate honest feed and comments on what i need to work on and what can be improved

uppin for some feed

Ahahahah I knew it was gonna be this beat the second I seen the title of your thread..

This was one of the very first beats I ever dropped on back in late 04..

Some quick feed though, lyrics are kinda simple... They get ya message across well, but you could definatly use some improvement on ya rhyme schemes and flow... Especially those parts where you quickly speed up ya flow to fit in extra words.. Thats a big no no.........

Keep it up man.. One of the biggest things you need work on is rhyme schemes and flow.. Everything else seems to be goin well for ya..


Peace.

thanks for the feed...uppin

uppin this for more feed

uppin for more...

Beat: i aint really feeling it, just not my style
Hook: pretty good, fits with the beat, pretty nice
Lyrics: not bad, simple but thats what i like
Quality: could be better, but still, its still good
Flow: pretty ill, you didnt have problems with that

overall, i listened to your music before, this your best track so far

RTF ON "GETTING COCKY"

thanks i'll do that....uppin for more

still uppin for feed

What's hot:
ur voice at the beginning...and ur flow on the hook...I think u and Team One might sound good on a track together...how old are you? like 17?
Flow is pretty decent...a tad mundane, but effective

What's not:

Beat is loud as hell...ugh
Your vocals are muffled...work on that mixing and EQ'ing bro
The "suck my dick" line was completely uncreative...But, then again, how creative can you tell someone to suck you dick?

Overall: I love the sound of this track, mostly because of the beat. Your voice and flow have a magnetic quality to them. Keep droppin bro...Elevate that flow some too and work on the EQ levels

lol that's not me on the hook....thanks for the feed....

oh and i'm 19

uppin for more

still uppin this y'all

still uppin this

Beat's Dope.
Flo fer ya chorus is really nice....
The quality on your voice in the verse is str8 garbage.
I dunno, I was expectin more in the verse judgin by the hook....
Dont even sound the same.....maybe the hook was there before u spit?

Dunno....I never heard this songs real version.

like i said that's not me on the hook...anyway uppin