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Chris Stylez vs Mad Skillz
Battle Rules:House Rules
3-0 K.O 6 - 12 lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 50 Check in by: 04-09-06 at 09:36 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
Mad Skillz has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-06-06 09:36 PM.
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Chris Stylez has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-06-06 09:37 PM.
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...Ima Problem...
See everyone laffs when "you stand up and talk" juss lyke "comedians" we think ur "funny" //
but they werent gone front b, coz they couldnt bare "watching him stuggle on tracks" lyke "midgets on cross country" // -2 if i lose to you, it would be equivalent to "buying ya own clothing" coz i mustve "sold my self short" mayne // ya shit is not personal its all plain, and watch meh force "lyrics uppin-smoke" lyke "singers using distress calls to airplanes" // -3 (uppin smoke = up in smoke...distress calls can include smoke signals) Have you snitching coz Im stirring up a "oliver twist" but no im not "charles dickens" // Yea im cocky why u bitchin??? Imma make you "face the torn-knee" lyke "injured hikers in tha fetal position" // -4 (Face the torn-knee= face the tourny...damn!) *|MORE GENERIC THAN 50 CENT SODAS|* Aint a "Jet Li" fan but i will leave you in your "grave from your cradle" // legend? nah juss fables, see when feedback for his verse comes alive he gets "nothin over a 5" lyke "people without cable" // -5 (damn...so tru...haha) see "3rd times a charm" witout bringing up "arguements during breakfast wit simon cowell" // wondering How well?, juss know that i will put a "hault to da punch" lyke "rocky balboa throwing in tha white towel" // -6 stylez reminds meh of "Babe : the pig movie" coz no matter how much u talk its still "a bore"// Tryin to act lyke u got suttin in store, ya generic punches are more "sub-par" than "professional golf scores" // -7 No need for a band, coz witout $1000 my verse is styll grand // you dont understand,this battle reminds meh of a "puppet musical" coz honestly its "all over with a show of hands" // -8 (shittt) watch ya mouth dude, or else ill "pull ya toungue out" lyke i was "adjusting my shoes" // no need for ten wat about chu??..ill put stylez "to sleep at 9" quicker den "children wit cerfews" // -9 |
ayo my b fam but idk bout lines how bout 8 barz dawg......u up 2 it or wat
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iight uppin 4 ya boi chris stylez....where u at b......
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nah but sum1 leave feed and say if u think i am gud enough 2 b in tha inc cuz it looks like chris still didnt drop yet
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Flow like acrobatics, to rip threw your aparatus, decreasin your status Cuz ya flows get sent to the corner more than active crack attics Im dope like coke processed plants, comming from the process plants While ya flow gets less fluid like cancerous prostate glands Every tryout line you dropped in my crew, resembles Deju vus Played concept rhymes from back in the day I used I never seen someone wanna be down with my crew so much Tryna scream Trigga Town Up, Is makin ya seem like a Trigga Town Slut Don't rock Avys like you really sick, when the battle you bout to loose Verses is like Mortal Kombat,I slice this Saibot and leave'em as the Noob This Kids I problem, Watch me solve em, I bring it back, then use da condom Only way he got my bitches on his back, is when he got his mom behind em |
how come i cant see wat chris posted on dis thread
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See everyone laffs when "you stand up and talk" juss lyke "comedians" we think ur "funny" //
but they werent gone front b, coz they couldnt bare "watching him stuggle on tracks" lyke "midgets on cross country" // -2 if i lose to you, it would be equivalent to "buying ya own clothing" coz i mustve "sold my self short" mayne // ya shit is not personal its all plain, and watch meh force "lyrics uppin-smoke" lyke "singers using distress calls to airplanes" // -3 (uppin smoke = up in smoke...distress calls can include smoke signals) Have you snitching coz Im stirring up a "oliver twist" but no im not "charles dickens" // Yea im cocky why u bitchin??? Imma make you "face the torn-knee" lyke "injured hikers in tha fetal position" // -4 (Face the torn-knee= face the tourny...damn!) *|MORE GENERIC THAN 50 CENT SODAS|* Aint a "Jet Li" fan but i will leave you in your "grave from your cradle" // legend? nah juss fables, see when feedback for his verse comes alive he gets "nothin over a 5" lyke "people without cable" // -5 (damn...so tru...haha) see "3rd times a charm" witout bringing up "arguements during breakfast wit simon cowell" // wondering How well?, juss know that i will put a "hault to da punch" lyke "rocky balboa throwing in tha white towel" // -6 stylez reminds meh of "Babe : the pig movie" coz no matter how much u talk its still "a bore"// Tryin to act lyke u got suttin in store, ya generic punches are more "sub-par" than "professional golf scores" // -7 No need for a band, coz witout $1000 my verse is styll grand // you dont understand,this battle reminds meh of a "puppet musical" coz honestly its "all over with a show of hands" // -8 (shittt) watch ya mouth dude, or else ill "pull ya toungue out" lyke i was "adjusting my shoes" // no need for ten wat about chu??..ill put stylez "to sleep at 9" quicker den "children wit cerfews" // -9 |
This was feedback posted for Chris Stylez
"Flow like acrobatics, to rip threw your aparatus" you took that from a song, i don't remember which one but yea.....checkin pollssss
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sum1 plz vote.....still uppin dis shit 0-0 we need sum serious votes......
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any1 come on vote......niggah dis battle has been in 4days now and we aint got no votes yet.....
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This was feedback posted for Mad Skillz
ur lines are a bit stretched and u need to work on the flow. ur punches are there but they aint personal in any way so its not connecting. u got some ok metaphores but u just need to work on delivery. put some truth behind your punches. talk about shit u can dig up on em and turn it against him. holla at ya.
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Voted For: Mad Skillz
Mad Skillz - You had a nice opener and a few other good punches throughout ya verse. Overall i think it was a good verse. A few personals, but you were lacking vocab. And i really didn't like ya structure, you should definately work on that. But overall good drop. Chirs Stylez - You had a good opener but a weak closer. In between you had a good use of multis and some decent punches. You had better structure than MS, but you lacked vocab. too. I'm gonna give to MS cuz he had more personals and more effective punches. Good Battle RTF Thanx Me vs. David Lama |
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