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David Lama 04-07-06 02:20 AM

Tempa vs David Lama
 
Battle Rules:

10 lines
due in 10 minutes
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g/l

No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting


Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 04-07-06 at 02:50 AM

Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in.

System 04-07-06 02:22 AM

Tempa has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-07-06 02:22 AM.

System 04-07-06 02:24 AM

David Lama has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-07-06 02:24 AM.

Tempa 04-07-06 02:32 AM

I put the “heat” on this nigga, got em “sweatin” like a “sauna”…
My tounge is “deterioratin” cuz I spit mo “raw” than this “lama”…
My rhymes are “sharp” I’ll lyrically “slice” a nigga like-you…
If I gave you a “butchers knife” you couldn’t kill tha mic-dude…
Se get it right dude, or I’m gonna have to adjust-ya-thoughts…
You should learn from my verse, instead of takin it as just-a-loss…
Hoe’s give me more “service” than “T-mobile”, all you do is ride-dick…
You’re not in “front” of me wit your vocals, but you can be my “side-kick”…
Only 3 wins, no losses and you tryna step to a top-dog…
But its all good cuz you’ll get your first when this verse gets dropped-off.

David Lama 04-07-06 02:34 AM

I got this. I don’t care what shorty say
cuz I’ll tear T apart. like Hulk Hogan in his glory days
he’s a glutton for pain. I’ll murder this slob
and get rid of temp quicker than dudes who find permanent jobs
my lines get oooooh’s. hence why Im eating u cats
tempo aint the reaction u get. its the pace I’m beating u at
fuck mind games. even you doubt ya better
people only say temp is good. when they talk bout the weather
we cant stand ya shit. its too whack for us to handle
you got people saying TBS. more than advertisers of the channel

Wordz AhGod 04-07-06 12:46 PM

Voted For: David Lama

yo this was good battle for a short lil time to drop. Tempa and lama both came good on this so its kind of hard to decide. U both were on point with structure, flow, punches, and personals. Im giving this one to lama though cuz I felt like his punches were a lil more effective. some lines had me laughin like a mu too.
good shit though.

David Lama 04-07-06 03:55 PM

good looks.. 1-0

up ...........................................

Wordz AhGod 04-07-06 04:14 PM

sorry for freeposting but id appriciated it if you would leave an honest vote in atleast 1 of the battles in my sig

Logic The Goonie 04-08-06 12:03 AM

Voted For: David Lama

tee hee

it seems like you really are the dude from RM, good drop


Vote removed

Logic The Goonie 04-08-06 12:03 AM

awwwwwww, fuck, my bad, meant to leave feedback. =/

Holler @ strobe

David Lama 04-08-06 12:09 AM

yea thats me.

I doubt you'll meet many people named David Lama in your lifetime, let alone the net lol. its my real name by the way.

Logic The Goonie 04-08-06 01:51 AM

Why the hell did you come to RV then? Most of these nigez is gobbage.

David Lama 04-08-06 06:59 AM

when I'm bored I battle at random sites. I like having a couple quick battles a day or every now and then

Daubs 04-08-06 07:26 AM

Voted For: David Lama

I got this. I don’t care what shorty say
cuz I’ll tear T apart. like Hulk Hogan in his glory days
he’s a glutton for pain. I’ll murder this slob
and get rid of temp quicker than dudes who find permanent jobs
my lines get oooooh’s. hence why Im eating u cats
tempo aint the reaction u get. its the pace I’m beating u at
fuck mind games. even you doubt ya better
people only say temp is good. when they talk bout the weather

ALL NICE

VS

PLAYED WORDPLAY AND STRUCTURE.

EAsy vote.

V./ lama

rexless 04-08-06 04:12 PM

Voted For: Tempa

I got this. I don’t care what shorty say
cuz I’ll tear T apart. like Hulk Hogan in his glory days
aight
he’s a glutton for pain. I’ll murder this slob
and get rid of temp quicker than dudes who find permanent jobs
decent name-play
my lines get oooooh’s. hence why Im eating u cats
tempo aint the reaction u get. its the pace I’m beating u at
nah,
fuck mind games. even you doubt ya better
people only say temp is good. when they talk bout the weather
eeeeh ok i guess
we cant stand ya shit. its too whack for us to handle
you got people saying TBS. more than advertisers of the channel
nah, weak ending








I put the “heat” on this nigga, got em “sweatin” like a “sauna”…
My tounge is “deterioratin” cuz I spit mo “raw” than this “lama”…
aight
My rhymes are “sharp” I’ll lyrically “slice” a nigga like-you…
If I gave you a “butchers knife” you couldn’t kill tha mic-dude…
nah
Se get it right dude, or I’m gonna have to adjust-ya-thoughts…
You should learn from my verse, instead of takin it as just-a-loss…
eeeh ok
Hoe’s give me more “service” than “T-mobile”, all you do is ride-dick…
You’re not in “front” of me wit your vocals, but you can be my “side-kick”…
decent
Only 3 wins, no losses and you tryna step to a top-dog…
But its all good cuz you’ll get your first when this verse gets dropped-off
ok ending


decent battle but i think temp just edge it out bearly


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