David Lama vs vinceness_deala
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vinceness_deala has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-07-06 09:41 PM.
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David Lama has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-07-06 09:43 PM.
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David Lama, u don't want no drama/ Cuz I'll put your thoughts in a bag and send it mama/ But first imma read it and see how u thought u could fuck with me/ then Imma put you body under the street/ I'm living a life of crime/ I'm a rapist how i fuck up your rhymes/ then u gonna wanna battle again and i ain't got that time/ I'm done fuckin wit u, u know the rules/ u and me is like pootles and pit bulls. FUCK WIT IT
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F the funny shit. I came to abuse you
I’ll fuck Vince up worse than Stone Cold Steve Austin used to he said he’d be a challenge, I’ll smack this dude found out V ain’t just for Vendetta. but for whackness too skill level?, I’m up a ahead by a bunch of degrees cuz VD = Illness. only when referring to venereal disease dead with the first line, you sure are frail, damn. I wrapped this deal up quicker than a good car salesman I got the punches, only downfolds been the fame only straight line you ever had was the underscore in ya name |
the a before ahead dont belong there
its suppose to be skill level?, I’m up ahead by a bunch of degrees cuz VD = Illness. only when referring to venereal disease ................................... |
Voted For: David Lama
David Lama, u don't want no drama/ Cuz I'll put your thoughts in a bag and send it mama/ But first imma read it and see how u thought u could fuck with me/ then Imma put you body under the street/ I'm living a life of crime/ I'm a rapist how i fuck up your rhymes/ then u gonna wanna battle again and i ain't got that time/ I'm done fuckin wit u, u know the rules/ u and me is like pootles and pit bulls. FUCK WIT IT NO this verse structure made it undable for me to read it learn how to write a verse and then start battling vs. F the funny shit. I came to abuse you I’ll fuck Vince up worse than Stone Cold Steve Austin used to Ight nice one 8/10 he said he’d be a challenge, I’ll smack this dude found out V ain’t just for Vendetta. but for whackness too Good 7/10 skill level?, I’m up a ahead by a bunch of degrees cuz VD = Illness. only when referring to venereal disease Lol nice 8/10 dead with the first line, you sure are frail, damn. I wrapped this deal up quicker than a good car salesman Eh ight 8/10 I got the punches, only downfolds been the fame only straight line you ever had was the underscore in ya name Good closer 8/10 Oveal 39/50 Overal I think david llama won this one Please rtf honestly: http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=225976 |
Voted For: vinceness_deala
vincesses verse David Lama, u don't want no drama/ Cuz I'll put your thoughts in a bag and send it mama/ But first imma read it and see how u thought u could fuck with me/ then Imma put you body under the street/ I'm living a life of crime/ I'm a rapist how i fuck up your rhymes/ then u gonna wanna battle again and i ain't got that time/ I'm done fuckin wit u, u know the rules/ u and me is like pootles and pit bulls. FUCK WIT IT 2/10 need 2 elevate no hate davids verse F the funny shit. I came to abuse you I’ll fuck Vince up worse than Stone Cold Steve Austin used to he said he’d be a challenge, I’ll smack this dude found out V ain’t just for Vendetta. but for whackness too skill level?, I’m up a ahead by a bunch of degrees cuz VD = Illness. only when referring to venereal disease dead with the first line, you sure are frail, damn. I wrapped this deal up quicker than a good car salesman I got the punches, only downfolds been the fame only straight line you ever had was the underscore in ya name 6/10 both need 2 elevate 4 real v/david lama Vote switched |
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my b i vote 4 david lama wrong box lol srry..... |
aiight there it go so u can read it better
David Lama, u don't want no drama Cuz I'll put your thoughts in a bag and send it mama But first imma read it and see how u thought u could fuck with me then Imma put you body under the street I'm living a life of crime I'm a rapist how i fuck up your rhymes then u gonna wanna battle again and i ain't got that time I'm done fuckin wit u, u know the rules u and me is like pootles and pit bulls. FUCK WIT IT |
vote up people. .................................................. ....
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Voted For: David Lama
he said he’d be a challenge, I’ll smack this dude found out V ain’t just for Vendetta. but for whackness too Nice bar. What and who the fucks a vinceness. |
vinceness is a block here in chicago u bitch ass white boy. come battle me i'll get ur ass
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Sorry your too dope for me.
I mean: "David Lama, u don't want no drama/ Cuz I'll put your thoughts in a bag and send it mama/" You might send some thoughts to my mum? cool. |
lol.. word ^^[/color=white].................................................. .....................[/color]
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