Black Dragon - H dot H
 

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=226055
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=225406
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Waddup, try and figure out who H dot H is...............i kinda tell you at da end of tha track.......'preciate any feedback.....on tha violin beat by Alchemist....

www.myspace.com/blackdragonsic
^^ the song should automatically play............

pz

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ha...1st to post

What's hot:
Good story...
flow wasn't bad

What's not:
Beat isn't bad, but it sounds like so many beats I've heard before...ehh
Work on incoporating an ill flow with a good story, ala Biggie Smalls...et. al,


Overall: decent...lacked focus and polish





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'preciate da feed Q..............

Beats not bad.

BLACK DRAG YOU NEED TO EQ YOUR SHIT!! bring that quality up man, it makes it easier to feel your lyrics as well as hear em. The story follows along nicely. Your delivery is right on time but your need to vary it so it dosen't become repetetive. This should have been two verses with three hooks on em to be a "song" too soudns liek about 20-24 bars that'd be a comfortable size for two verses. people forget short songs fast unless it's intense.

Peace.

'preciate da feedback Apexx, yea man imma make it a lil longer...........but thanx for ya input....

pz

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Who'd you say made that beat, cuz i swear i've heard it somewhere before i just can't put my finger on it.

dawg no one eva said i made that beat, it's by Alchemist

^^^ I didn't say you said that YOU made it, i asked who you said made it. Chill out.

lol, i'm chillen fam, haha yea i kinda read it wrong mah bad homie...............

^^^ All good, what you record wit?

My mic is a AKG Perception 200, the USB interface i use is Lexicon Omega, and a mic cord and Cool Edit Pro 2.0 and that's bout it...........i see in your sig it says Phase One is that ur new name........cuz i'm from NC too man Charlotte........

pz

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decent beat.....not great delevery but emotions ok....flows not bad..kinda choppy tho...yea..way choppy...lyrics is nutin great..not that bad tho...

not a bad drop

RTF on soma my shit if ya get a sec

'preciate da feedback........i got ya Cho.............