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Im back on the mic(New quality)
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upppiinnn now..
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I haven't heard you in a long time man. You have sure got good man Your delivery is kinda weird though. Flow was pretty smooth, I like the lyrics a lot. The beat is very good and I'm sure you made it. Overall I like the song, the quality is pretty strong. I like this track, I might even download it too lol.
yo amn could you rtf here: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=225805 |
oh word thanks alot man
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nice.. you sound dope the only problem is like your not so confident as u don sound like it.. practice more and you'll improve yo delivery..
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Listen...youve improved alot famlay...flow is decent....delivery is good...ayo confidence needs to be upped a lil..but that will come....llyrics are koo lol...hook is nice..u always produce dope hooks...keep doin it ure improvin alot...fam..thas wasup..HOCUS PART 3....on tha way ;)
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word thanks....
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listening....
not really feelin the hook however it does fit with track.....lyrics are decent but from your review you like to keep it simple....flow is pretty good....needs a lil more emotion though...overall a decent track....7/10 |
Listening now...
Beat's good... Your quality isn't very good yet...I hear hiss and it's kind of distorted. Flow is alot better...it's smooth, but it is choppy in places, I did notice...Lyrics are okay. It's alot better than your last stuff...delivery is lacking huge though. Work on that for sure. "Rainy Days (Last Stand)" |
damn i can def. tell you got a lot better...your pressense is good and your flow is good...but your emotion is lacking....put a lil bit more emotion into it...the beat is fire..if you made that then your the best on rv.....this is pretty hot....def. the hottest you've done.......the hook is pretty catchy....you def. lost a lot of that accent you had....hmmm not too bad...just up the quality a tad bit
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getting cocky?
aiight What's hot: Beat is good...but needs more melody for such a heavy drum line, IMO...ehh...I'm a fan of melody I like the hook...especially the way you delivered it...Might have been better with some ADlibs in the background (uh, yea, speats bish!, etc.) What's not: Your flow was on beat, but you mumbled it...wassup with you being the 2nd person to use reverse in a track today?...hmm...must have had a special on that effect Overall: good track bro...not bad at all |
word thanks alot
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beats nice....
ehh ...ur emotion is awfulll...no delevery whatso ever.....vocals r a bit loud...lyrics r decent...flows not that bad....ehh..idk keep working @ it bro |
iight thanks...
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