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MusicManiac50 04-09-06 09:33 PM

hey everyone
 
hey i just my first song up on soundclick tell me wat you think

www.soundclick.com/bi9boi2

a k w o r d Z 04-09-06 09:44 PM

the subject matter was pretty corny, lyrics were simple, but that's pretty much expected with this type of song... other than that it wasnt too bad.

OrEo da cookie 04-09-06 09:50 PM

it wasnt bad but your girl will like it better than any one...

Mentor 04-09-06 10:08 PM

this really belongs in the audio section

Ysdat 04-09-06 10:54 PM

Post tracks you have recorded in the songs section in audio forums and you will recieve more feed back.

47.29" of Zigs 04-09-06 10:58 PM

you can't imagine how hard i was laughing through this whole song

WACK

Tha Q. 04-09-06 10:59 PM

What's hot

1st cat's flow is on beat
I couldn't tell the difference between the two emcees
Quality isn't bad at all...vocals sounds pretty decent here


What's not



Boo @ this being a Past Tense track...made me click under false pretenses
Beat is kinda cooky soundin...not terrible...but ehh

Hook: corny-ish, but, at least the delivery was pretty decent


Overall: I didn't like this much. decent quality...decent rapping...nothing exciting or original about this track



Also, if this is for your girl, you should let her hear it rather than post it...iono...jus seems odd
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LaTiNKiTTeN 04-09-06 11:02 PM

ur voice isnt bad,n overall its not bad for a first audio of course ur flow needs more work but not bad for a first try....but ummm,that chubby 12 yr old pic of u is gonna hurt ur "image" i'd remove it with a quickness

Blay'all 04-09-06 11:10 PM

^ this girl obsessed with pics lol

but anyways, the chorus was corny, lol verses straight, both of you had good flow but lyrically there isnt much to be said...

Past Tense 04-09-06 11:10 PM

lol @ you posting up here....

lol ahhahah this tracks ok...... but hes the first up after the hook thats the first time he ever rapped tho..... I freestyled my verse and what not

La Cosa Nostra 04-10-06 12:30 AM

Make this thread in the songs forum...............


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