Keepin' It Raw - Leave links I'll gladly rtf.
 

www.myspace.com/paranoidxl

all done by me, except for the beat.

leave links and shit, holla

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2716606
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2716599

RTF on my new track pls


What's hot:
beat is something LE would flow to...intense
ur flow is good
delivery fit the tone of the track
lyrics weren't bad at all

What's not:
vocal quality sounds odd, fuzzy and muffled...


Overall: GOod sounding track...the quality jus needed to be upped...not bad though bro...I liked it

Listenin..hold on the mp3 player on myspace fuckin up...*waiting till it starts* *whistles*

Listenin now...beat is nice yea LE wud do this....youre flow is decent...and ure articulation is good but it rlly does sound like arnold schwarzernegga...delivery is decent...lyrics are good....very nice....quality is decent i think..ure emotion has got better..and so has delivery only prolem i got is tha voice n a lil of ya delivery but keep workin at tha delivery..hot..1

Listening...

Yeah I would rip the shit out of this beat...

Flow is start and stop again...breath control, again, in need of work. But opverall, flow is good. Lyrics are good...but you should really get some better concepts...Delivery is good. Quality was better on the last track, but it's bearable.

overall, you are elevating. Just keep at it.

thanks uppin.....