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Go Grazy Remix featuring Zone Owlt
yo... some shyt we did a few months back that never made it to RV for some reason... lofi actually sounds better than the hifi...go figure... by the way, Zone actually got another version that he did with one of his boys... holla at him for that version...werd
Zone drops first and ya boy I.G. drops the second verse links: http://community.rapverse.com/showp...270&postcount=5 Cho track http://community.rapverse.com/showp...306&postcount=6 Jay 286 track The track: Go Crazy Remix |
too much to quote, this was definetly a hawt track...diggin' your hook better than the real one and ya verses were definetly better than Jeezy's shit lol...this sounds like something Kanye would say if he was on the remix to this, your style reminds me of his and that's good cuz I love Kanye To Tha...all you gotta do is clear up ya vocals on the 1st verse and hook...sounds like you got a tongue ring, or your tongue is curled while you're spittin' lol...whatever you did to the 2nd verse, it was a lot clearer than the 1st part... overall, track was tyte, once you fix the quality I'd DL it and bang it :) P.S. didn't realiZe it was another person on the 1st verse my commentary still rings true lol |
Zone as in Will Sun Yu?
ugh neway What's Hot: Beat...brings back memories of "Dead Presidents sound track Zone's flow is decent...the start/stop technique would sound better if his delivery/presence were more pronounced IG's flow is better suited for this track = good What's Not: Zone's vocals are too low and muted Beat has hiss in it IG's vocals sound too processed Overall: This track sounded like Zone rapped about one thing, and IG rapped about another...it was disjointed in that way...pretty decent though...it needed a central tying theme to hold my interest more not bad fellas 1 |
werd... thx for da feed... and lol@ugh...lol ... yeah... track is like 4 months old and I was just starting to understand my quality issues, hence the processed sound ya talked about... lo fi sounds better than the hi fi... but omma fix all that shyt once GA po-9 stop playing around with my ID and my bank card...lol... iggidy up!!!!
oh... and zone basically talked about life in detroit from his standpoint and i spoke on NY life from mine ...so yeah... the same... but different :thumbup: |
word...aside from quality issues....zone needs to pronunciate his words better...and you need to work on breathing a lil at the begining of ya verse....sounds like you a lil out of breath n struggling to say some of the words....jus some constructive critisim but you said its old...so you prolly got that worked out by now
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nah... my equipment at the time was extremely shitty and I'm surprised that it's even as clear as it is...lol but yeah, new mic is coming... plus i never used a mic stand and i was sitting down... that adds to the sound deficiencies.. i know exactly what i need to fix..well, for the most part anyways... but thx for da feed... 'preciate ya
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Aigth
Beats Dope Eww @Will Sun yu's quality FLows koo ,deliery was nice,lyrics werre koo feelin the emotiion WWhats with the quality? *changes to lo fi* Much better! Ok Hooks nice,feelin it.......... IG's clarity is mucchhhhhhhhhh better,word up Flows better,feelin it works on this beat Deliverys koo feeling it Like the way you ride the Beat IG You should double upp's though Word Koo Shit overall:7/10 |
hahaaaa... werd... thx for da feed homie.. RTF is in order if ya got links... holla at me... good and bad feed.... werd.... tell a bruh what he needs to do to improve and shizzz.... but yeah... EVERYBODY... PLEASE... STICK TO DA LO-FI!!!!! LOL
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hit me..... werd
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Listenin'...this young jeezy beat is sick..wil sun yu ive heared much better..but this is decent..flow gets better durin da joint...lyrics are good..qualiry is ewww tho...but i like ya style this is a decent shit..delivery is nice..IG..mayne tha only thing holdin u down mayne is ure quality..tha rest ure shit is crazy...i love yo flow..delivery is hot too...good joint..8/10
can u rtf: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=226459 |
no doubt... gotta run out real quick but i'll hit this when i get back in jae... yeah.... in the process of getting a new mic and headphones... should definitely hear a difference then....one
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word thanks..will do lookin forward to it...
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