Jae Stackz - Im Baaack
 

This an intro joint...recorded it at 1am in the mornin..what yall think?..

www.soundclick.com/jaestackz

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=226294
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=226292

What's hot:
beat is good, but needs to be amped a tad
Your flow was on track to being good, but your delivery lacked some...like you didn't hold the syllables you needed to hold to really be ON POINT...not bad though




What's not:
work on breath control and delivery when you do a flow like that...makes it iller


Overall: good soundin track though...I liked your intensity on it



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Thanks fam..........

Beats Dope.......

Intros Nioce Yeah Yeah Yeah WOOAh WOOAH!

Lol

Flows nice,feelin it that punchline thng you showed me huh?Word up

you know what i thought bout the lyrics...good shit

Deliverys nice,feeling it,seem more AMPED now,lol@straight/queer eye line haha

Lol@Hilfigers line

Emotions koo feeling it,got a hype vibe!
Presence is imrpoved

Cadnece seems fine,you could mask the breath loss part by double ups over it

Good shit,im downloadin!

Overall:
9/10

Thanks..............

upppin...........