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Verse 1 Its the prodigal son back on the block witta passion These cats wanna know my style, I wanna know whos ask'n I dont aprove of you dudes try'n to rape my music Cuz I'll catch u wit the heat and you wont even use it Its a real bad look, I'm get'n sick of these wack niggas I aint goin out like ya'll, I'm not a regular rap nigga Catch slugs to ya body if you run'n ya lips Rob ya bitch 'n' have my whole crew run in her lips I''m really back nigga, i spit that crack nigga Get a fuck'n clue, unless you wanna get clapped nigga Listen to ya boy, I'm one of the last real Emcee's Lyrically, if I was Talib Kweli, I'd be smoke'n them tree's Kick'n it wit Mos Def on the set, I'm mos def gone wreck Every track I breathe on, spit a couple 16's 'n' I'm back on Listen as I define ya defintion and get right back on |
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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=225494 there u go uppin dis man, stop sleep'n |
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its coo man for a few lines it went up and down thru-out but it wasnt wack it shoulda been longer or somethin
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thnx man, i appreciate da feedback
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Man how u gon' mention Mos def and Talib, and u spittin commercial..... the flow was strayt... u got potential, keep 'em coming and step ya game up
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It Was Cool But It Should've Been Longer
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this was ok. i've seen thousands of verses like this. so this is nothing but your own words. rhymin' was str8. content was played out like soccer. this was an average piece. not real ill, not garbage. simply, anyone could've said this....stay up...
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dude you gotta stop rhyming the same words over and over again, thats not good. always a no no it makes ya verse come off mad newbish
and yeaaa I seen alot of breathe verses this wasnt too bad "Its a real bad look, I'm get'n sick of these wack niggas I aint goin out like ya'll, I'm not a regular rap nigga Catch slugs to ya body if you run'n ya lips Rob ya bitch 'n' have my whole crew run in her lips I''m really back nigga, i spit that crack nigga Get a fuck'n clue, unless you wanna get clapped nigga" ^best lines. But I hate that you rhymed nigga and lips so much |
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