My Final Fantasy - Blackmage ft. Knight Sir Rebral
 

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=225132
Apex - two to the head

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=225008
Blakowt

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=225107
Keep it on me
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This tracks about a guy who reaches his pinnacle and becomes schitzophrenic, he realizes this other side is better and attempts to harness it to become better.

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My Final Fantasy

^That's all you need right there.

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Goin back to the top.....

Let's try.....uppin..l.

my man black....no one leavees you feed....how fucked up is that.....let me take a sec to listen to this ish....


well i had heard other versions of this...you really improved the quality from what it was...but you need a hiss redux badly...or something....the beat is chill, and your flow on it is nice but a bit boring...its the same the whole time almose....the lyrics...well thats where you excel your lyrics are nice....but quality still needs to get upped alot....the hook could be up in volume a bit....its like you got the peices to the puzzle but your puttin it together wrong.....(meaning if you could get your quality down and flexed your flow up and down a bit itd be very very ill) question.....were you a text head before you started audio? i unno.....so premise and lyrics but the rest still needs to be upped....hopefully other people will leave you feed and help you out some more

mos def thanks i'll hit you up uppin....

Listening...

Like the beat. Quality is iffy...hissy and cracky a bit. Flow is on beat, but it lacks switch ups and it is a little boring. But it suits the track well. I am liking the lyrics, this is a good story. Delivery is shaky, but it's decent. We should do a collab sometime. Overall, this is decent, but you still need work. Keep working on it and you will get it.

Keep it up.

Return the favor...

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=226176

Mos Definately, you'll get hit up pretty soon peace