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So Rell (2-0) vs Rush Lingo (2-1) vs Rexless (1-0)
 Verses Due Thursday at 11:59PM Eastern No Line Limit Biting = Ban Feeding = Vote Deduction Swaying = Vote Deduction Must Vote On Four Battles And Post Your Links Votes Due Saturday Night New Battles Up Sunday Morning For Full Rules Click Here |
16 lines...
good luck ya!!.... |
Sure...A Waste of my lines.
Links: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=226579 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=226585 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=226673 ^^Worth 2 links^^ |
I just realized you fags only won off of No Shows...
It's Easter Sunday, I got nuffin planned I'll try sumfin new. Go to Church and pray that some Skill Posseses you Two. When I viewed Rex I just asked what is he damn it. I know it's played - But I don't need his Sig to see HIS-Panic. I'm scratchin my skull I see your skill and don't know if your promos worse. Rush that record ain't shit... When you won by No Show and lost to someone with a No-Show verse. You fags are trash, I'll give advice, some shit to think. Rex: Work on your Call backs and Rush...Don't forget your links. My cash is gettin' low, I'ma start usin Lingo on some other shit. 'Cause The way I Whip Rexless my Insurance Company won't cover it. Don't get too big headed don't think it's over man. Rush claims he's milked the game... Which hences the reason we now have Kroger Brand. I thought two was better than one these prudes have no Brains. I mean their idea of Black Customs is based off of Soul Plane. Now on my way to Church Holla. |
You guys need to incite some soul, I'ma put the knife in slow
Can't handle what I'm peddlin, ur too tired like a bicycle an FUCK a RUSH, take ya time there something thats not complet-thou cuz im so fat in this game, next to me u look like a flyin doritto Professin ur hurtin me?, SO.REAL Dog I got u stressin with urgancy Dude broke into a sweat & got arrested for burglary am a leave u 2 blue like crypt signals, when i rap i spit and depict pictures my rhymes are 3-d, yours lack creativity like stick figures u suck like a sandwich wit no cheese, i rap an dont-sing im a eagle u jus look up to me like ur a bird wit no wings ya aint even close, movin at a "i dont see ya pace" and the only heat unda ya waist is ya gonarhea case an i dont need to relay the sceen of what ya girl did so imma say this, she def on T.O.P like ya sig fuck ya Bitches for clickin submit I’ll shatter ya shit, then Give a new lease on life, I foreclosed the glass box ya lived in |
i forgot about yall, here.
i be tryin to throw punchlines and win this text shit so here goes nothing. - so rell and rexless i got predicted against, kemp said i'm not winnin this watch how you still lose even though my time is limited cuz i'm the one and only G, hush it, cuz ain't no clonin, see, go check the mag, even my opponents quotin me both ya get stepped on, ran over, and hit right while i'm rollin i'm surprised at both ya verses, cause i expectin yall to write me a poem my rhymin is potent, in battles i get the best of a man So Rell already a bitch, and we know Rexless of a man yo're both second at best, i'm in the ranks, not even focusin hard and neither of you will get hire unless you holdin a job so don't manage to speak, wonder the worst that can happen to me? this is, askin to be in a challenge this week and havin to challenge the weak and see me, i'ma blow up - duh, Rell ya just a homo thug i would give you the no show love, but i decided to show no love |
So rell got this quite easily in my opinion
so.rell..you had harder punches then the rest..and some ok personals...the rest was mediacore..i was feelin some lines like It's Easter Sunday, I got nuffin planned I'll try sumfin new. Go to Church and pray that some Skill Posseses you Two. rush lingo man your ish was aiight nothing special...only thing you really had going was your multi's that was decent..everything else was alright. rexless everything was plain...the structure was eh, flow was aiight, punches were weak. get at me vote: so rell |
1-0 My Way Votes!
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I'm scratchin my skull I see your skill and don't know if your promos worse.
Rush that record ain't shit... When you won by No Show and lost to someone with a No-Show verse. You fags are trash, I'll give advice, some shit to think. Rex: Work on your Call backs and Rush...Don't forget your links. My cash is gettin' low, I'ma start usin Lingo on some other shit. 'Cause The way I Whip Rexless my Insurance Company won't cover it. Rush claims he's milked the game... Which hences the reason we now have Kroger Brand. vs You guys need to incite some soul, I'ma put the knife in slow Can't handle what I'm peddlin, ur too tired like a bicycle Professin ur hurtin me?, SO.REAL Dog I got u stressin with urgancy Dude broke into a sweat & got arrested for burglary vs my rhymin is potent, in battles i get the best of a man So Rell already a bitch, and we know Rexless of a man yo're both second at best, i'm in the ranks, not even focusin hard and neither of you will get hire unless you holdin a job vote: So rell...more consistent...many more quotables..rex and rush had cool verses as well |
i didn't lose because of a no show verse lmao. i lost because i didn't have links, duh.
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Rush Lingo "my rhymin is potent, in battles i get the best of a man So Rell already a bitch, and we know Rexless of a man" I felt you played yourself up way too much throught your verse and didn't really focus on damaging your opponets. If you really learn how to put together a fitting concept with nice wordplay you'll get somewhere, but till then you'll just be at the bottom level of emcees. Rexless "am a leave u 2 blue like crypt signals, when i rap i spit and depict pictures my rhymes are 3-d, yours lack creativity like stick figures" Reason I choose this as your best line, was because this was really the only bar in your whole verse where you tried to use both lines to tie in your whole concept. Even with the first part of your first line not really having a meaning...the last part of it plus the second line is what you need to focus on. Do more of your verses in that kinda format. Your concept was decent, but your wording of that punch dropped down the value of it. I saw what you were saying, but if you can express it in a diffrent way but still getting that point across you'll be golden. So.Rell "It's Easter Sunday, I got nuffin planned I'll try sumfin new. Go to Church and pray that some Skill Posseses you Two." Your verse was filled with so many in correct concepts and fillers that you are just on the same level as the two people you're battling. Your best line wouldn't even meet a mediocore standing in a vet battle. You have a way to go, but you're in the right direction. Let's take your best line for example; decent concept in the second line...but as we know its pretty played, but it stood out in this battle because of how the other verses were. Use that bar I quoted and build of that. Focus on making your entire verse that but bettering your concepts with more personals. Vote - So.Rell ~R~ |
You fags are trash, I'll give advice, some shit to think.
Rex: Work on your Call backs and Rush...Don't forget your links. My cash is gettin' low, I'ma start usin Lingo on some other shit. 'Cause The way I Whip Rexless my Insurance Company won't cover it. Don't get too big headed don't think it's over man. Rush claims he's milked the game... Which hences the reason we now have Kroger Brand. I thought two was better than one these prudes have no Brains. I mean their idea of Black Customs is based off of Soul Plane. Vs ya aint even close, movin at a "i dont see ya pace" and the only heat unda ya waist is ya gonarhea case Vs my rhymin is potent, in battles i get the best of a man So Rell already a bitch, and we know Rexless of a man yo're both second at best, i'm in the ranks, not even focusin hard and neither of you will get hire unless you holdin a job V/So rell This was a decent 3 way but i got rell winnin wit a more consistent verse...and quotes |
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R-Rated good look on the advice I'll work on it. You'll see a difference in my next battle I hardly tried in this one. |
I'll be looking for improved punch lines...you have great ambition, keep up the hard work and you could really do some damage to these other emcees.
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overall rell wins wit better lines... vote=sorell |
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