Truth About Romeo and Juliet
 

The truth about Romeo and Juliet!
Juliet was a fucking whore with nothing at all to admit,
And Romeo was a psychotic emotional pre-teen bitch,
A stupid emo faggot..
Locked himself in his room because he couldn’t get a girl,
Thought she was lying to him but still was his whole world,
Got dragged out of his girly bed to a party with his friends,
Met a dumb slut named Juliet
... And fucking fell in love again,
Their parents fought over someone flipping off the men,
With a bite on the thumb nail that wasn’t directed at them,
Family members from both sides got murdered and raped,
The women wanted to prove themselves not try to escape,
Cut off the enemies skull and claimed their bodies for dead,
Brought them back to the males and had sex with the heads,
But meanwhile Romeo and Juliet ignored both of the sides,
Only known each other for 3 days
... And plan to commit suicide,
A bunch of crazy cultish weirdoes fight over fucking nothing,
If I didn’t know any better than I’d think Shakespeare was huffing,
On the third day Romeo and Juliet drank the poison they choked,
Romance my fucking ass,
... This stories nothing more than a joke,

Link 1: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=225322
Link 2: http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2722845

Not bad... Short aggressive rant trying to completely re-analyse a classic. I liked the initial concept of the piece but for some reason I just never connected. Like, I got a real angry harsh tone when I was reading so I felt something clearly if you inspired a specific tone in my inner monologue, but somethign about it jsut felt off the whole way through for me. I mean, when I look at it and re-read it it has nothing wrong contectually and it has all the elements of a good Om, it's just something personally I dont like I guess *Shrug* Lol, and I dont know why but when I was reading it I kept reading it the way Run DMC raps "My Addidas" for some reason haha. Good piece overall man, just didn't connect with me though.

lol word up. that the truth bout that shit. pretty much how the story goes. good topic, last shit i planned on seeing here. very good kidd. im begging to like ur shit. pretty funny and that isnt romance it is a joke. so good job.

Thanks both for the feed.