the death of a loved one
 

every day is like a step in the past
mutual fellings of love thought to last
3 day's latter comes with a letter of intent
your b/f been shot and his life has been spent
you look to the heavens ask good why this happened
a soldier once loved left behind as the hours of time passes
your heart clashes and feels like it's stuck in your throat
death isn't a disease there is no antidote
i know it's hard to forget your bestfriend
hard to see your lovers life come to an end
we sit here and try to alter the past
for a better future and better life to grasp
but nothing can ever heal a broken heart
to mend it back together is just a little start
i see it like this things happen for a reason
god died for our sins and still he is bleeding
your b/f last breath has all begun for a reason
for god took him back is the change of for seasons
a little present that he has left in your woom
your b/f will always bee there but your son will come soon
never forget but alway remember
the birth of your son on that awful december
you look into his eyes all you see is his father
your man lives in your son so don't cry just don't bother
everones life somday comes to an end
wether it's your mother or you fathful bofriend

uppin..........uppin............uppin............. uppin............uppin............uppin..........u ppin...........uppin.......uppin.............uppin ...........uppin.........for feedback

you have mad potential, but you were lacking alot of imagery you know? this seemed like a boring lalaby.anyways the emotion was decent actually but un like poetry topicals do not depend a whole bunch on emotion it needs more imagery you know?
so work on that ok.