14. K.ontroverzy.Y (0-2) vs 15. Chris Stylez (2-2)
 

checking in..............match or watever

check..ready..for this bs again...

Ok excuse me miss, All i really just want to know
Is you gonna come decent, or bring up fake personals
Damn 0-2 for record, man for you aint no comming back
Herd ya like 40 year old virgins,K.ons known to wack
My flow adores you, with multiple plurals,aint learn from text turtorials
Thats why right know, he knows he better off stickin to orals
Like we all quadrapelgics, nobody here is feeling you
like we all fake tarot readers, ya flows nobody vibing to
You a lesser MC, ya rhymes aint bringing in the funk
Just watered down version, like the hypie is to krunk
Rapping is for everybody, but not just for a nobody
Anybody that raps alrighty, can make you look like a portapotey
To get notice, you just gotta spit out of the ordinary
Like 50 and Game beef, nobody tryna here da K.ontroverzy
You spittin written dem wack lyracism is a known fact
Cuz all ya rhymes fake like Jamie's Tats

You couldn't come up with jack!....no really kid....he whored-ya... (1)
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=226681
Maybe that explains why he can't stay out of "george".......ahh!!! (2)
......You wanna battle me? Hold Up, What would "The Carter" do? (3)
OH!! it makes sense now, When he said "Fuck Bitches, Make Money,
.................................................. .....He was talkin bout you!! (4)

someone please save this kid

You "suck" kid.....Oh shoot, my bad, he's just gettin "back to business" (5)
A little bit of chris stylez and he'll give it up for a "young dollar"?
.................................................. ......................that's ridic-lous.. (6)
.......You reppin "T.I?"..washin his feet is the closest u gettin to "king" (7)
u da fireman? to earn da cheque, a thong and a pole is all u need to bring (8)
........i'm tired of this kid'..fo real...half the sites eyes is lookin like jins.. (9)
and chris styles is sorta like the drink, cuz "kontroverzy" alwayz comes up,
.................................................. ...............Ya bars will neva win... (10)

......How you gonna write my styles kid...you can't even write ya own.. (11)
You like a fossolist kid......................cuz u only got the right to bone.. (12)
I bring the sickness son.....drop lines off the top of my head, U styll lose (13)
Chris styles ya garbage son......uppin my rep is the only thing u will do (14)





check the personals

2nd line...hes from goergia
3rd line his sig has lil wayne knicknamed carter

his name used to be young dollar

nothing.

vs.

......You wanna battle me? Hold Up, What would "The Carter" do? (3)
OH!! it makes sense now, When he said "Fuck Bitches, Make Money,
.................................................. .....He was talkin bout you!!
.......You reppin "T.I?"..washin his feet is the closest u gettin to "king" (7)
u da fireman? to earn da cheque, a thong and a pole is all u need to bring

this was a weak battle. chris, you had nothing. like, all those punches were TOO simple and they had to real wit to them at all. work on the concepts, try and have new shit. think of fresh material, word them right(set up the first bar to connect with your punchline some how.. it'll make sense and flow better). i ain't tryin to give ya tips like i know everything, but you could do better if you battled some more. kontroverzy, you did straiight. you've been here for a while and it appears that you can think of some decent concepts, you just need to word the properly. i'm not the best with wordin either, but just try and condence your verses. and stop with ".................", and stop centering it and don't do that shit where you have the quote in the middle sayin shit like, "get this kid a doctor, i'm about to send him into convulsions". shit looks mad newb'ish. but you did pretty well. overall, weak battle but i see kontroverzy takin this easy.

v/ k. ontroverzy.y

nothing

vs.

......You wanna battle me? Hold Up, What would "The Carter" do?
OH!! it makes sense now, When he said "Fuck Bitches, Make Money,
.................................................. .....He was talkin bout you!!
^just no and it was ur best one

its obvios who won but wtf kon u need to quit forcing ur wordplay its wack
and u need to take all the numbers and the ...... outa ya verse but imo u still took this

vote//kon

NOTHING.

VS.

......You wanna battle me? Hold Up, What would "The Carter" do?
OH!! it makes sense now, When he said "Fuck Bitches, Make Money,
.................................................. .....He was talkin bout you!!

Damn. This battle was FUCKING WEAK. Chris just brought a complete ass verse, it had NO BARS worth quoting at all. Frankly, and I don't mean to sound cruel but after reading his verse I had already voted for Kon in my head without even seeing his verse. Chris was that weak, all the concepts were used up and the wording was wack. There was nothing flipped nicely at all, that attempted nameplay with the 50 and Game beef was some of the weakest shitty nameplay attempts I've ever seen. But, don't feel too bad though Chris, because Kon came fucking weak as hell to. You had like one decent bar and that wasn't all that good. You are still forcing your wordplay like a motherfucker which makes your verse look wack. Also, all the ......... shit makes it look gay, the numbers at the end make it look herbish and the fact that you have to explain your bars makes it worse.... not to mention you had to explain the first bar with the wordplay that was ALSO FORCED TO. I mean damn, you are still battling with the same style and concepts from when you was Killah Bwoy... FUCKING SWITCH IT UP ALREADY.

AND IF YOU DON'T LIKE MY VOTE OR CRITICISM, THEN ELEVATE AND CHANGE IT SO I DON'T HAVE TO SAY THIS SHIT AGAIN..... OR, SUCK MY DICK!!!

WORD!!! :thumbup: WE ALL COOL!!!

V/ - Kontroverzy

Up over no-shows.

.....You wanna battle me? Hold Up, What would "The Carter" do? (3)
OH!! it makes sense now, When he said "Fuck Bitches, Make Money,
.................................................. .....He was talkin bout you!!

Vs

Nuthin

V/kon this was a really weak one...ya came wit some played shit.Chris you had a weak verse wit nuthin that was even worth quotin work on your punchs and personals

u da fireman? to earn da cheque, a thong and a pole is all u need to bring (8)
^^lol
vs

nothing

vote:kon...not many quoteables...kon you came wayyyyyyy betta last week...i think chris stepped it up this week sum his verse was way better then last weeks...but still u needa work on sum stuff keep battlin...

my bad for the weak battle..i was at skool and ihad 10 minutes to drop....

If you don't vote then you'll still lose, just PM me the links as I've closed ur battle.

K.ontroverz.Y wins 5-0

K.ontroverz.Y wins (1-2)
Chris Stylez loses (2-3)