Speats- Intro
 

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nice thanks, nah scott storch made it

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RTF...


beat is hard as hell....

whos that on the adlibs??? the yeas and Uhs???

verse is more that decent.... the only thing i can critique it on... is basicly uppin your presence... and delievery... you gotta make niggas here you... you know?? like grab your listener by the cohones or box and squeeze till you got they attention you know?? i liked how at the end of the hook you brought your voice up for emphasis... come and FIGHT.. lol... that was dope.... you already know what to do wit it... you showed that wit this track... keep droppin.... its only up from here...


1ne


-Don Tito Bronsky

thanks man really appreciate it

its coo that u got ya own style... i fucks with it ... just work on you're articulation and delevery.... Decent for an intro .....more to come

thanks bro thanks

Aigth i love this beat

Your flows koo,stays onbeat,nice lyrics,i think your improving fast......i aint sure about your delivery seems like you a lil bored,so jus work on that if you can.presnece needs uppin still seem like you a lil scared of the mic,or maybe its jus you need to develop your style more....try uppin your delivery a lil and your presecne...your elevatin well...koo shit

RTF On My "Put You On The Game Remix" Plz

thanks, i will.

one more.......

playing..

beats ahhh, very loud. quality is solid. havent hear anything from you in a while.
lyrics are ok, vocals are not too clear, slightly mumbled in parts.
liek the speed in it. when the beat cuts you coudl do with slowing it down a touch just to get that emotion out.
it sounds a bit rushed. like you gotta get it spit out or someones bout to cut your balls.

overall, its cool. just try make them vocals a bit clearer, and I definitly reckon slow down the accapella part slightly.