Last Night!!!!! Jay 286 and Enygma **Leave Links**
 

Yup.....a tight ass collab between Jay 286 and myself. Sort of a party song :thumbup:™

Last Night


Links.....
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=226610
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=227368

word mainstreamish n shit...gotta love it

this is dooooope yo! im feelin the beat, its got a nice feel-good/ mainstream vibe to it...jays verse is real hot, flows sick, deliverys perfect for this track, lyrics are fine...hooks nice (i think this is the hook im talkin bout anyways lol), "drank so much that i got fucked up!" haha<<....enygma comes in nicely, flows hoot, deliverys nice as fuck yerr dope verse again lol...yerrr jay ,ya' 3rd verse's basically the same as ya' 1st one, tite lol....sickkk track this, nothin' much more to say lol 9.5/10 get at me for a collab sumtime haha

p.s. check my "raw rhymes" thing out :thumbup:

Word.......appreciate the feed man. I'll check your shit out in a minute :thumbup:™

Jay...come on bro...wassup wit u hittin up beats I already hit...lol...dats like sharin chicks, or dudes...or somethin...NVM


Back to the track

What's hot:
Beat, even though the volume is low
Jay's flow with the rhyming told the story of his verse well...nice there

Enygma's verse was good...and I think your styles match well...

What's not:
Enyg...experiment with a De-esser to cut those "highs" on the "S" words...not bad though...they compromise the quality of the track, esp. when I play them through my speakers on Window's Media = highs too intrusive

DIdn't remember the hook

Overall: solid track...wished it had a hook, or the hook was more memorable...





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ha, yea the hook was a bitch and no lie that is what sounded the best....oh well

Yeah.....we debated about the hook for a while....lol

Listening...

Another sampled beat...it's decent.

Jay comes in...good flow, lyrics are decent for this type of track. Flow kinda falls off in some places...decent though. Was that the hook..? Shoulda used a chorus effect or layered it.

Enygma...comes in with a nice flow. Good lyrics. Voice kinda sounded muffled, but it was a straight verse.

Jay's last verse made me laugh..."did a keg stand and fell on his ass"...lmfao...I can relate to that line...

Pretty entertaining track. Keep it up.

lmmfao!!!!... yo... you dudes is clowns!!!! this was some real entertaining shyt.... and I agree with Q, y'all styles definitely compliment each other... hook was pretty decent... i don't see how Q could forget that shyt.... it was pretty obvious to me... but ya verses were hilarious! i'm dl'ing this shyt... i know mad kats who can relate to this shyt... including myself!!!!!!

OH YEAH.... A drinken song.. thats my shit.....haha this is pretty dope.. really creative.....jay ya verse was illy...like good ass concept i think flow coulda been touched up a lil bit... nyg... yo shit was dope as hell... i like this track alot... hook is good to... good ass emotion on it... you did it right on this one...

word thanks....uppin for more feed

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