Black Dragon - Pressure
 

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'preciate any feedback...........

pz

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ight lyrics are pretty good...quality is straing...you need to work on flow and delivery...its like you dont feel what your sayin...your just sayin it, and for a point your were a smidge off beat...your hook is ight....your verses are slackin...not totally bad tho...step it up keep on uppin ya game....thanks for the feed by the way....not bad keep it up

flow:7...its kinda robotic... not flowin..recitin.. u know
lyrics: 8.... wuld sound better if flow was right....
chorus:7...it was aight!!.......
beat:9...nice hip hop beat yo!!!
song overall:7.......more emotion and flow more

'preciate da feedback..............

Beat:... i like that joint... i remember it... but i cant recall where from...


any way... your lyrics is good man... now what you need to do... is like... Remember them shits... and spit them a million times before you go to record... this ways you can get funky wit the way you say em to a beat... you can play wit your delivery better .. the more you know your rhyme.... cuz your delivery needs a lil uppin... other than that... your flow is right... take a dose of Confidence... and dont hold back on the mic kid...

your elavating... keep droppin....

RTF


-Don Tito Bronsky

'preciate da feed Tito.............o yea tha beat is Xzibit's Paparazzi.........