Algebra vs OneStepBeyond
 

Battle Rules:

10-20 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 350

Check in by: 05-03-06 at 07:15 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

OneStepBeyond has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-02-06 02:28 PM.

Algebra has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-02-06 09:33 PM.

u a skateboarder and plus you love rock
so how u a rapper must just be the pot
ima die of laughter your messed up OMG
you crackin me up your rhymes get old
ur wack as fuck just say goodbye and go
u dont have ta be a skater ta grind a pole
you probably use Q ta get ur dick sucked
must not have a clue u must be mixed up
i seen ur face ur scarred ta post ur pics up
your worried cuz your a faggot not a man
with hair more curly than old ass Ragedy Ann

ehhhh i barily tried just since im not much in the mood and my text record is fucked already so dont make much diffrence to me

ohhh and no diss ta Q i just used his name for that part

Alright kid, lets be honest, you ain't nothin' to shelf,
Cause you ain't a pro, zack... That’s just what you take to keep from cuttin' yaself,
We’ve done open mic’s and homie you watched as my doors widden,
Now I roll with the big dog’s.. You just roll on the floor crying,
You’re Algebra cause we don’t understand you? Well hoss,
Even I passed it… Just never thought that I would pass it a loss,
Say you’re looking for a good name for you to post on your sound click,
But every name you choose is gay.. So I guess that you’ve found it,
I posted myself drunk… Got responds like “This kid is on acid!”
And yours got a simple “Keep your shirt on! That shit ain’t attractive!”
Bitch, this is madness… You ride Q’s nuts like the bench that he lurks,
Shit… I wouldn’t doubt it if he’s mentioned in your verse,
The more we figure you out the deeper you get? That’s somethin' supreme,
But true, cause the more I realize you're wack, the farther above you i seem..

This was feedback posted for OneStepBeyond
 

You tried way too hard.

which one tried too hard???? him or me...if it was me i didnt try hardly at all

This was feedback posted for OneStepBeyond
 

checkin the polls...........................................

Voted For: OneStepBeyond

Looks like my man Kirk got this

Obvious reasons...

This was feedback posted for OneStepBeyond
 

I'd vote but Kirk doesn't need it. Uhh...that's all.

This was feedback posted for Algebra
 

Uneven Battle.


OneStepBeyond
Alright kid, lets be honest, you ain't nothin' to shelf,
Cause you ain't a pro, zack... That’s just what you take to keep from cuttin' yaself,

• ... Eh,i heard it all before like Sunshine Anderson

We’ve done open mic’s and homie you watched as my doors widden,
Now I roll with the big dog’s.. You just roll on the floor crying,

• It flows well,but not a hard hittin punch at all

You’re Algebra cause we don’t understand you? Well hoss,
Even I passed it… Just never thought that I would pass it a loss,

• Nice punch,bad set up

Say you’re looking for a good name for you to post on your sound click,
But every name you choose is gay.. So I guess that you’ve found it,

• ... Not Bad

I posted myself drunk… Got responds like “This kid is on acid!”
And yours got a simple “Keep your shirt on! That shit ain’t attractive!”

• Nice,best of the verse.

Bitch, this is madness… You ride Q’s nuts like the bench that he lurks,
Shit… I wouldn’t doubt it if he’s mentioned in your verse,

• Not feelin it

The more we figure you out the deeper you get? That’s somethin' supreme,
But true, cause the more I realize you're wack, the farther above you i seem..

• Pretty nice closing

Overall a fairly decent verse,nothing exciting.

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Algebra
u a skateboarder and plus you love rock
so how u a rapper must just be the pot
ima die of laughter your messed up OMG

• Terrible.

you crackin me up your rhymes get old
ur wack as fuck just say goodbye and go
u dont have ta be a skater ta grind a pole

• Horrible Punch

you probably use Q ta get ur dick sucked
must not have a clue u must be mixed up
i seen ur face ur scarred ta post ur pics up

• Bad,but it's a little better

your worried cuz your a faggot not a man
with hair more curly than old ass Ragedy Ann

• Nope

Seriously, what you need to do is work on some punchlines. Listen to some other battlers (off rapverse) and im not saying bite,but try to develope yourself a flow and learn how to create hard hitting punches that get the listener.

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My Vote: OneStepBeyond

I cant vote officialy,but i didnt type this up for nothin.

This was feedback posted for Algebra
 

Al-Nah not a good opener middle and end. No hard hitting punches no flow not really rhymeing and you just wernt creative at all. You were talking about skate most the time and those lines didnt reall work out to great.

OneStepBeyond- Obviously uve been in some leagues. But some of your lines started really good and then turned out played. like

"We’ve done open mic’s and homie you watched as my doors widden,
Now I roll with the big dog’s.. You just roll on the floor crying,"

It was a good verse cuz your punches hit and you set up the diss and then just came outta nowhere nice job.

v/ OneStepBeyond-are you Kontext?

Voted For: OneStepBeyond


Alright kid, lets be honest, you ain't nothin' to shelf,
Cause you ain't a pro, zack... That’s just what you take to keep from cuttin' yaself,I posted myself drunk… Got responds like “This kid is on acid!”
And yours got a simple “Keep your shirt on! That shit ain’t attractive!”The more we figure you out the deeper you get? That’s somethin' supreme,
But true, cause the more I realize you're wack, the farther above you i seem..

vs

ur wack as fuck just say goodbye and go
u dont have ta be a skater ta grind a pole

and even that wasn't great, whole verse was fucked....i dunno

those are the lines i laughed at, OSB won hands down, and probly could've won typing with his face

v/ OSB for not sucking douches, word up...have a nice day

Ummm... Upping I guess..............................