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/ing 05-01-06 08:55 AM

Mimesis vs /ing
 
Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 05-04-06 at 08:55 AM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

System 05-01-06 08:57 AM

/ing has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-01-06 08:57 AM.

/ing 05-01-06 09:00 AM

The bottom line is this
I will brutalise this M-I-M-E-sisisy,
Worst than a repeated wife abuser
Work over his kneecaps with a sledgehammer
Eagle this asshole into his grave hole,
When I knock u out the park u will truly be elevated
But you were underrated,
For being able to hold more shit than a cesspit
I even got the pics of u sucking Vinceness tits,
To see them go to www.mimeabitch.com,
I let off this rap pump action
Leave a hole in you the size of Arizona,
Ur new name will be One Big Vagina
You can go independent from your pimp,
One big fuck for all because u can hold the world’s
Dicks
Ur a threat to no one either in the streets or on
Html text and java script,
Children will stone u, people will gossip about u
Birds will just want to shit on u,
So go cocksucker perform Seppuku-
That is Japanese for death before dishonour

System 05-01-06 08:56 PM

Mimesis has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-01-06 08:56 PM.

Magic5 05-02-06 11:14 PM

Lmao. I don't even remember agreeing to this. . whatever.

This is a waste of my time. . my punches'll just wreck your face
All I need is five minutes to drop this peice of shit into second place
It's whatever. . I'm just better then you, and my raps is gory
So I'll push back slash. . until he shifts straight to the wack category
Yeah, it's cool. . I win battles, gain respect, never spittin garbage
. .While an I Q. . just answers what the site should consider retarded

There's 6.

/ing 05-03-06 08:44 AM

Kid, two days... two fucking days....and
this is what u will bring to fuckin me

Magic5 05-03-06 10:08 AM

You really think I spent two days on that? Try less than five minutes. I accepted the battle when I got on a few days ago. . and then yesterday I got bored as hell so I typed up 6 lines.

Lmao @ thinking I'd spend more than 10 minutes total thinking about this battle.

X-tortion 05-03-06 10:40 AM

Voted For: Mimesis

This is a waste of my time. . my punches'll just wreck your face
All I need is five minutes to drop this peice of shit into second place
It's whatever. . I'm just better then you, and my raps is gory
So I'll push back slash. . until he shifts straight to the wack category
Yeah, it's cool. . I win battles, gain respect, never spittin garbage
. .While an I Q. . just answers what the site should consider retarded

vs.

The bottom line is this
I will brutalise this M-I-M-E-sisisy,
Worst than a repeated wife abuser
Work over his kneecaps with a sledgehammer
Eagle this asshole into his grave hole,
When I knock u out the park u will truly be elevated
But you were underrated,
For being able to hold more shit than a cesspit
I even got the pics of u sucking Vinceness tits

Mimesis- Your verse was better overall with the content & flow...nothing amazing, but in my opinion, the opener & closer almost hit harder than /ing's verse. The fact that you pushed a shorter & stronger verse gave you the advantage for this win to me.

/ing- Your structure was good..but you had no good punches or personals. It flowed choppy because it seemed like most of your verse didn't rhyme. You had more creativity used, but ya punches would hit harder if they was worded better. Improvin on your content will help you greatly in the future

Vote: Mimesis

*DipSet* 05-03-06 03:18 PM

Voted For: Mimesis

ok its sad but true Mim has won again and only with ^ lines now this is really sad

break down Mim had him from the start he flowed better and keep up with the flow /ing couldnt rhyme 2 lines togeher if his life depended on it it looks like shit did he rhyme even one of them togher in that whole thing the answers NOPE so vote gos to


MIMESIS again

I Am Unreal. 05-03-06 03:23 PM

Voted For: Mimesis

You win for the pure fact that you didn't suck. /ing, get some punches, flow, structure, hell, even bite off someone wack if you have to because that was just awful.

v/mim

Kirk 05-03-06 11:57 PM

Voted For: Mimesis

Ok... My vote goes to Mimesis because he had punchlines that make sense. Oh yeah, and his rhymed.

This is a waste of my time. . my punches'll just wreck your face
All I need is five minutes to drop this peice of shit into second place
^That is true.
It's whatever. . I'm just better then you, and my raps is gory
So I'll push back slash. . until he shifts straight to the wack category
^Doper than his whole verse.
Yeah, it's cool. . I win battles, gain respect, never spittin garbage
. .While an I Q. . just answers what the site should consider retarded
^Ha... You win.

The bottom line is this
I will brutalise this M-I-M-E-sisisy,
^What is sisisy?
Worst than a repeated wife abuser
Work over his kneecaps with a sledgehammer
^That didn't rhyme.
Eagle this asshole into his grave hole,
When I knock u out the park u will truly be elevated
But you were underrated,
^You we're underrated? A compliment?
For being able to hold more shit than a cesspit
I even got the pics of u sucking Vinceness tits,
^Ok.
To see them go to www.mimeabitch.com,
I let off this rap pump action
^Act-shun. Nah, man. Maybe some other time.
Leave a hole in you the size of Arizona,
Ur new name will be One Big Vagina
^Doesn't rhyme and isn't a punch.
You can go independent from your pimp,
One big fuck for all because u can hold the world’s
Dicks
^Ummm.....
Ur a threat to no one either in the streets or on
Html text and java script,
Children will stone u, people will gossip about u
Birds will just want to shit on u,
So go cocksucker perform Seppuku-
That is Japanese for death before dishonour
^I didn't even know what was supposed to rhyme and be a punch and all that shit.

Mimesis wins for not trying and having a better verse.

Magic5 05-04-06 10:19 AM

Lmfalmfaolmflamfoafmlafmo @

Quote:
Originally Posted by OneStepBeyond
Ur a threat to no one either in the streets or on
Html text and java script,
Children will stone u, people will gossip about u
Birds will just want to shit on u,
So go cocksucker perform Seppuku-
That is Japanese for death before dishonour
^I didn't even know what was supposed to rhyme and be a punch and all that shit.


Dope.

But yo, post up some links and I'll go vote on them or whatever. No joke.

N.Tavarez 05-04-06 10:36 AM

Voted For: Mimesis

It's whatever. . I'm just better then you, and my raps is gory
So I'll push back slash. . until he shifts straight to the wack category

vs

nothing


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