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Desperado aka Jae Stackz - "I Came To Party"
www.soundclick.com/desperado
what yall think, this is on that party tip, hope u feelin it, update wit links in a minute |
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Listening...
Beat sounds pretty mainstream. Lyrics ain nothin specail haha...Pretty catchy though. Flow is pretty nice. Something I would bump. Pretty basic club song...but they're all like that. Overall, catchy, club bangers are supposed to be like that. Keep it up. |
Thanks fam..........
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uppin..............
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couple of name changes
No hate...but as soon as you said "this is song of the year" I wanted to turn it off...And, if you weren't my boy, I probably would have. What's hot: flow delivery What's not: nothing to stand out lyrically Overall:good sounding, but too common...a new twist in the hook would have compensated for basic lyrics 1 |
Word thanks I jus added "song of the year" cos it sounded good fo an intro hah...so word..
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o shti, this the kidna beat i coudl rip...damn thsi defintly radio ready...hot shyt from ya, good originality, nice chorus....good delivery flow and everythign....only thign was lyrics but i feel ya on dis one...we gon ahve to collab man...this shytt is hott
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hot mainstream shit man! that beat sounds soooo sick, playin it loud, with the bass 'nd shit haha. flows decent in it, lyrics are fine for this kinda track i reckon, deliverys hot, dope chrous. yerrr overall just a nice track man, nuthin much more to say, i'd defo' bump this 8.5/10 :thumbup:
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Thanks fam...........
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k..typign as I listen....good beat choice..intro coulda stronger..shoulda had a ill catch phrase or a more original sounding uh type sound....k..real commercial approach...flow fits subject matter....delivery is where ya def improved alot ya pronouncing ya words now....hook was simple an repetitve an mixed nice..good idea for subject matter...lyrically u aint come wit nothing..I think u coulda mixed a few tight lines in there but its all good this is something katz would bump lyricism woulda been icing on the cake but as is still good...keep'em coming........1
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1,2 step type beat, hope u got a singer on this... not enough emotion ya voice could be a cooler sound but u seem like u tryin to spit grimmy but it doesn't fit ya voice it seems or this beat
i like the chorus lyrics and flow, just need a singer for this type of song and beat good as club beat, just i think u went a lil to grimmy on it. good shit i'd give it a 7/10 def could make this a 9/10 with a few corrections return the favor and hit this song up http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=227829 |
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