X-tortion vs Raw King
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

please explain ur votes so we know wat to elivate on

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 05-05-06 at 12:02 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Raw King has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-02-06 12:02 PM.

I'll leave u broke if sex sell...X..u best bail....
u only XL...a size too small...even the best fail...
u calling for battles...it drops like nextel...
u x-man...battling the man of steel...so get real...
ur best deal...is not droping at all...
theres too much blood on the walls for voters to consentrate on u dawg...
and if I dont use personals...that means that god is merciful...
punchlines that dont ryme'll get ur spine fliped vertical....
to be real...are u sure wanna except?...
hasn't ur rep taken enough punishment yet?....
who the fuck am I battling? u aint one of the best....
u unknown to this text...u just one of the rest....

not sure how many lines that was. I think it took me like 10 or 11 minutes to put down. please explain any votes u got for me.

X-tortion has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-02-06 12:29 PM.

This king-raw?/ We don't believe anything ya jaws-speak/
Your flow worse than tv land marathons/Cause they all-week/
No one cares if you from Miami, the Beach or Tallahassee/
Punish ya worse than iraqis/ Bags holdin packs-of-scraps-seen/
Don't act as if ya tough as hustler holdin-drugs/ Discard-to-fiends/
Only hobby ya bizzy-with is/ Tryin to bone-thugs-wit-harmony/
Fight, devour ya soul less than seconds with this rifle-power/
That keeps ya sight-encoutered by jesus/Grab a bible-coward/
Keep readin-it-wrong as dyslexics/ These moral laws-I-constitute/
Shows ya only jobs in San Diego/ Men gettin wigs to be prostitutes/
Still leave you shot/ Without using heckler & kotch, ya restin/
You want your sights to be raw/ Then stick-to-watchin-wresting/
Spit & pissed on a regular basis/ By chicks who spot-a-peasant/
Buyin Billboard's number 1 in stores/Is why you got the hottest-record/

yo that shit was tight dawg. I like that bonethug line. good luck cuz.

Voted For: X-tortion

vote goes to x-tortion for slaughtering raw king...x sort of lacked punches..but had some pretty ill wordplay...and that's what won..because raw king, the lack of punches is bad, and the punches you did have..were bad...over all your verse was amature at best....and x-tortions wordplay outshined anything you brought to the table

Voted For: X-tortion

x-tortion-Overall your verse was pretty decent you had some nice multies created inside your verse, which flowed nicely and your punches were pretty raw. you had some dope name/wordplay in there and good structure personals not so much but you came raw with thos punchees man havent read something this well in a while props.

The creator-Your verse was weak, kinda like a newbie verse nothing really punching you basically just focused on trying to rhyme and have multies and what not...just throw some punches and shit lol.



This king-raw?/ We don't believe anything ya jaws-speak/
Your flow worse than tv land marathons/Cause they all-week/
Don't act as if ya tough as hustler holdin-drugs/ Discard-to-fiends/
Only hobby ya bizzy-with is/ Tryin to bone-thugs-wit-harmony/
Shows ya only jobs in San Diego/ Men gettin wigs to be prostitutes/
Still leave you shot/ Without using heckler & kotch, ya restin/
You want your sights to be raw/ Then stick-to-watchin-wresting/
Spit & pissed on a regular basis/ By chicks who spot-a-peasant/
Buyin Billboard's number 1 in stores/Is why you got the hottest-record/

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