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this is a club song, im doin a faster apced song agn....voice is a lil funny tho cuz i had a cold when i recorded but hey, tell me wutcha think and leave a link

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=3876747

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Listening...

Beat is ok, kinda weird...Hook is hot man, I'm feeling the effects...LMFAO UH UH UH UH, UH OH, u O OH!

Verse comes in, dope multies, feeling this shit...Quality is good, flow is good, presence is sexy...I don't hear anything wrong with your voice...Again, I love this hook...

Good shit bitch

eastcoast ur so wack that ur gon start another eastcoast westcoast war again :thumbup:

lol im j/p nuthin personal

lol....u dont even have any songs on your soundclick and your records below 50% so stfu :D

woah ya sig....gooddamn im dope....is that nolan??

if so thats from wayyyyyyyyyyyyy back....

for ya song, best part was the hook....ya verses didnt really stick in my head, needs more body in it...more presense, more mixing......more effort needs to go into this....not a bad song tho

Uh, Goddamn Im Dope is my aim, you faggot fuck. :love:

my bad man...way back like 4 years ago when i got into rap there was a kidd who had all thse goddam sn's, i think goddamn jackass was his last...we were cool way back then....my bad man

What's hot:
I applaud the risk on the hook...But, it lacked appeal
Flow is good


What's not:
Vocals need more presence
Beat is monotonous

Overall: creative sounding track that lacked polish

i like the way this beat sounds... at first... chorus is pretty good but it lacks emotion....and delivery... verses are average.........turn ya vocals up...ya flow is on point.... you can ride a beat well just make something stand out... like they where saying it lacked luster....chorus is sounden better second and third time round...... good looks

rtf

already heard this beat, its fucking dope, i really like that girl saying "huu uh hu" aint really feelin your hook, not enough emotions man, nice flow, turn up the volume for your vocals, i like your verse. flow fell off like once or twice so its not bad, i like your voice, you sounds white haha, anyway good song man, we should collab once if my accent dosint bother that bad lol

Lol, chill bro. I was just messin.