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TonyTone 05-11-06 07:31 PM

A Moment of Time
 
A Moment of Time…….
Elapses every second you take to think
When cities collapse and reluctant children procrastinate
And as of late, a moment seems to be all that remains
To maintain claims before the greedy cheat us for our gains
One day..you may look at your self…..wealthy and fortunate
The next..a card board box on city street coordinates
Too poor to sit among society, so you satisfy yourself quietly
As a guy without a wife or female partner. This might be
Your moment to shine or perhaps the moment of time
When you realize someone just ruined your fuckin life

A Moment of Time
Ah yes, how quickly it flies by
Only time will tell…..
How you’ll end up n whether you’ll get bucks
So when it’s almost up, the worst you can do it let up
I recommend you don’t test luck, let it come as it pleases
Shit, knowin MY luck, time’ll run out right as I need it
^^Read this, and read it well..take advantage of opportunities
Absorb the knowledge, grasp it or be in for a rude awakening
Hear what I speak as these words leak from my teeth
2 planes colliding with twin towers….less than 24 hours
A carton of milk turning sour…
Several hours after a storm begins and your frige runs out of power
So imagine how long your final years of living will last
Make use of the present, think about the future….
And stop living in the past.

There’s a time to relax and a time to get out there
Guess what….....that moment is here.


~Tony B
May 11, 2006

TonyTone 05-11-06 07:32 PM

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=227974
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=228011

TonyTone 05-12-06 03:52 PM

uppin......................

TonyTone 05-15-06 03:09 PM

damn yal niggas slackin on the feed

Kawn Flixx 05-15-06 05:48 PM

This was a pretty decent drop , you had lots of emotions and feeling in this drop that i was really feeling , structure was decent could be better..overal this was a pretty decent peice on thing you could have done better was your wordplay and vocab usuage. keep it up.


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