keep ya head up
 

this is a lil topical type trakk, i kno a few other people already did this beat but o well i felt lke doin it to....leave links and leave feed.....1....vote hot too ;)

edit: fixed link:

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=3916863

fed:

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2740754

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2740793

What beat is this? It sounds real familiar but I can't remember where I heard it. Sounds like a Shadowville beat. Anyway it's tight. You sound mad young kinda like A+. If you work on ya delivery a little it could be sick. Flow could use a little work. Sounds like a southern accent too. Anyway lyrics are good. Good quality. Concept is good but played. Good emotion at the end. Like I said before flow could use a little work. It was off and really showed at the line

"it's not about the inside but the interior"

There were too many syllables in that bar which is why you had to rush the line. Structure of the song seemed like One Mic from Nas where the 1st two verses were rapped normally and then the last one with more emotion. Overall solid track. Keep grindin