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"CRHYME DYNASTY"
sUPERvILLAIN FT/ cHALK cLOROX & SMOKE ONE!

www.myspace.com/smokinpenguin

LEAVE US SOME FEED BACK WE JUST DROPPED IT 2DAY!


http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2741924

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2741930



BRAVE ALIEN INVADER, CRHYME SINDICATE FAMILY




this iz 4 tha hater chokein on wang yo!
www.myspace.com/smokeuno

watch wat u say
s1,ft/ d, mennis

lol..................fix ur flow homie....

hater i probly rip u any track garenteed!!!

BRAVE ALIEN

I'm guessing SV was first......The problem was that you were trying to fit too many words in each line. I used to do the same thing......cut some words out. Second dude (Chalk?)had no presence at all. The whole thing was monotone. Same thing with the flow....too many words in one line. Third guy (Smoke Uno?) had a better presence and quality, but his dubs were off pretty bad and he also had the same flow problem. Just work on cutting some of the words out here and there......

I see you guys trying to come up though....good shit fellas :thumbup:™

^^^thanks alot brutha.........good lookin' out. much love.


s.v.

ok. i listened. i thought the beat was basic, but you all try fiiting too much into a single bar. you end up farther behind beat which personally loses my interest faster than exercise to the obese. i however listened to the whole thing. lyrically, i cannot comment because my attention was on all of your flows, which didn't match that beat. so just do what's been said. take out extra words, work on delivery and presence....it's a mic, not a fukin c.ock.

Listenin'...Intro is koo'...Beat is decent not too anthem shit tho...

First dude reminds me of Cho like crazy, dont rlly like how your voice is alot not my typa joint but stil has a raw delivery that remind me of a rock nigga...flow is good sum bits u put too much words into it...

2nd dude..more of my style...flow is good...quality aint...delivery is nice..likee the voice...falls off a lil to the end

3rd dude....has the best flow on this track...got good multis...and lyrics are good...delivery is decent however his voice sounds a lil dragged...decent jawn

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...913#post2743913

can you rtf...

let me guess....all yall are text head crossovers....damn shame, this is proof that if you can text you cant necessairly rap....if smoke one had flow he woulda been the best

^^^text head crossovers??? lol.

im not trippin' off the poor feedback, its no biggy to me. truthfully, i know this track doesnt show anything near my full potential, so im not upset by your comment(s)....its whatever. it was a fun track to do regardless. mark my words though, my next audio will be far superior.

me and smoke got some work to do....

the audios will continue to come, its nuthin'...


s.v., big bad c.s.