just feel me for a sec.....
 

yo check it man,

am a mid age spic that love to beef like i cant stand chick'ens
but there is more to my life then ,money girls and coke flipp'in
there a struggle deep in my heart that got my soul missing
cuz every day i earn respect i lose a check i could of made living
but NO, i wanted something i cant have, found something i cant own
plus my resent communication u hear had noting to do with a phone
just a couple of shots from the block i sleep and daugther plays-in
why the fuck the street a place for war, an a safe home is called the days-in
these are the times where old kids needs to grow up
and show us how to make a living, insted they out there with gang sign they throw up
wont be satifyed till they in a cuff'in or brain a couch pottao
everyday they wanna be killahs but when the sound go off there afaird thou?


i never thought life could be like this
never thought the nite would see lights...like this
a bounch of haters and fags who wanna be like sis
so for food i feed him a right-fist, i see u dont like this
u like what u hear.. yea.. plus it be me who write this
like shaq at the 3 if u aim i can see u might miss


un-finished!!!

drop feed back plez!!

Sup R this was a decent droped !! had good flow ! nice vocab could have been
up but it was alright,.. and the topical was cool but u could have come a little
more creative then that but all round decent drop.

Stay up

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Nah I Dissagree With You Crit, I Didnt Like This Peice. No Hate Rex But It Jus Was'nt Complex Enuff For My Liken. Try Picking A Solid Subject, Something You Could Really Go To Work On Nah Mean, This Type Of Issh Is Played As Hell.

Try Uppin Ya Vocab A Lil, Pick A Subject You Can Drop Good Emotion And Imagery On.

No Hate..Jus An Hounest Opinion Rex..

Peace Out 1

I like it, doesn't stand out however but still a nice drop

7.9/10