Black Dragon - Since I've Started
 

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=227657
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=227966
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juss a short lil track prob my 1st track, after the intro on my mixtape.......

www.myspace.com/blackdragonsic
^^ " Since I've Started "

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Listenin', Feelin this beat..Like the sample at the begginin..your flow is good..and your gettin much better...lyrics basic but dnt need to be great..im feelin this reflection track this is a nice short joint...8/10

'preciate da feedback.................

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Listening...

Wasn't feeling this beat much...Vocals were a little on the low side.

Flow...was good enough...it was on beat fine. It was pretty choppy in places...but just keep workin on that, keep smoothing it out and you will get it. Much better from your last shit. Hook was decent. pretty basic. You didn't seemt o comfortable on the mic, which in tunr hurt your delivery. Go ravage on that thing...I think your glowing with potential, just gotta let the light out.

Keep droppin.

damn...I JUS got this beat....lvls is low....flwos ok..dubs is a bit loud ....delvery is weak...as is emotion...lyrics is ok...u need to get more hype man...

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