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Valerie 05-20-06 02:44 AM

Imagine.
 
Imagine the world with no War or death.
or killing someone in there very footsteps.
and only Imagine if the world one day was pleasent.
and for once people followed religion to one day seek heaven.
children with needs imagine what such real life brings.
with all the hate mixed with volient and racial things.
kids are born into gangs and a war over turf.
in gods eyes wasn't this 1 life, 1 love and 1 earth?
imagine no slavery getting beat for something you feel isnt free.
or killing a innocent black man because of his future dreams.

Valerie 05-20-06 04:53 AM

no one ?

XpLiCiT187 05-20-06 05:04 AM

Overall Structure Was Plain & Simple, But You Was Obviously Tryin To Deliver A Message Ratha Den Go Mad Lyrical On It. So I'm Feelin The Deepness But Its Short As A Mofucka.

Valerie 05-20-06 05:21 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by XpLiCiT187
Overall Structure Was Plain & Simple, But You Was Obviously Tryin To Deliver A Message Ratha Den Go Mad Lyrical On It. So I'm Feelin The Deepness But Its Short As A Mofucka.


coo thanks man for the feedback.

and it sopposed to be that short.

Valerie 05-20-06 05:25 AM

Upin this fam. :thumbup:

Valerie 05-20-06 08:42 PM

uppin this .

XpLiCiT187 05-20-06 11:32 PM

Look Dawg Its Understandable You Want Ya Shit On Top, But Don't Be Selfish...i Gave You Feedback, You Been In & Out Of Open Mic All Day Uppin Ya Own Shit, You Seen I Dropped Somethin... Least You Could Do Is Show Some Respect & Give Me A Lil Feed On My Shit Feel Me.

Kawn Flixx 05-21-06 01:37 AM

Closed read the rules


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