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SpokenBluntly 06-01-06 12:51 AM

I Dare You To Test Me
 
Most niccas talk shyt cuz they "vowels" is loose/
THEY KNO I PULL MORE "CHICKENS" WHEN IM RIDIN' IN DA "COOP"/
type of chick TO RATTLE YOU ON YA FROONT STOOP/
IM TALKIN BLOOD SPLATTERED ON DA WINDOW LIKE I WAS SHOOTING FOR THE TROOPS/
U THINK THIS SHYT IS HOT...PUT ME IN A BATTLE SEE THE DAMAGE THAT I DO/
I NAIL RANDOM NICCAS TO PINE LIKE DA CRUCIFIXTIAN/
AND CUT OFF YA MIC LIKE AN ORAL CIRCUMSITION/
I SUGGEST THE REST OF U emcee's FINE A NEW POSITION/
I'M SHOOTING FOR THE TOP SPOT AND LIKE CUM SHOTS I AIN'T MISSIN'....

EASYYYYYYYYYYY

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SkaNdaLuz 06-04-06 05:36 PM

choppy...hard to get into it...you shouldn't put quotes on your "wordplay" cuz it's annoying...if it's good wordplay, a writer or rapper will notice it without it being pointed out....keep workin on it...try to tell a story...a longer one...9 bars is kinda weak...pz

Kawn Flixx 06-06-06 11:32 PM

Closed read the rules


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