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I Dare You To Test Me
Most niccas talk shyt cuz they "vowels" is loose/
THEY KNO I PULL MORE "CHICKENS" WHEN IM RIDIN' IN DA "COOP"/ type of chick TO RATTLE YOU ON YA FROONT STOOP/ IM TALKIN BLOOD SPLATTERED ON DA WINDOW LIKE I WAS SHOOTING FOR THE TROOPS/ U THINK THIS SHYT IS HOT...PUT ME IN A BATTLE SEE THE DAMAGE THAT I DO/ I NAIL RANDOM NICCAS TO PINE LIKE DA CRUCIFIXTIAN/ AND CUT OFF YA MIC LIKE AN ORAL CIRCUMSITION/ I SUGGEST THE REST OF U emcee's FINE A NEW POSITION/ I'M SHOOTING FOR THE TOP SPOT AND LIKE CUM SHOTS I AIN'T MISSIN'.... EASYYYYYYYYYYY Feed 1 Feed 2 |
choppy...hard to get into it...you shouldn't put quotes on your "wordplay" cuz it's annoying...if it's good wordplay, a writer or rapper will notice it without it being pointed out....keep workin on it...try to tell a story...a longer one...9 bars is kinda weak...pz
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