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tinozwai vs TEK-NIK
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10 -14 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting time for your merking :thumbup: Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 06-01-06 at 04:40 PM Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in. |
tinozwai has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-01-06 03:59 PM.
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TEK-NIK has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-01-06 04:01 PM.
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like meteorite i pass through undetected through the lyrical radar
thunderous rhythms colliding in cerebral cortex exposin my wicked stature force of nature comin harder than the five elements im the sixth one(slickest one) stealin the show from the other veterans i`ll play with yo Tekniks takin me as a weak freak i seal thiss diss in a minute i'll leave it at dat all ur rhymes is written they cold so i'm expecting them to be frost "bitten" u a has been rapper a joke to me like richard pryor /with da mesh on ma teeth i'll still spit thru da wire/ I've yet to LOSE MY SWAGGER...like step-dads, i'll ABUSE THIS BASTARD Ya punchlines don't penetrate, maybe you should USE A DAGGER |
like meteorite i pass through undetected through the lyrical radar
thunderous rhythms colliding in cerebral cortex exposin my wicked stature force of nature comin harder than the five elements im the sixth one(slickest one) stealin the show from the other veterans i`ll play with yo Tekniks takin me as a weak freak i seal thiss diss in a minute i'll leave it at dat all ur rhymes is written they cold so i'm expecting them to be frost "bitten" u a has been rapper a joke to me like richard pryor /with da mesh on ma teeth i'll still spit thru da wire/ I've yet to LOSE MY SWAGGER...like step-dads, i'll ABUSE THIS BASTARD Ya punchlines don't penetrate, maybe you should USE A DAGGER __________________ |
yo,
Im bout ta be abusin my comp,by choosin ta stomp..
.....all over tino,cuz tha only Impact he made was usin the font!
Im tha Truth.............an he weak an close ta being ah quitter!
When he drop,R.V. needs a garbage truck ta pick up his litter.
really,This isnt elevatin...Its eliminating this pest an put em in a germ tank.
You suck so much I betcha his insides look like ah sperm Bank.
Your wack an you cant harm me......now watch ur time expire.
You gotta go to Iraq with tha army.....juss ta have ah Line of Fire!
Ill abuse ya chest so much ya guts'll spill.
Cuz Im finna put slugs in ur mouth an I aint talkin bout no Gold Grill.
this guy's a joke,Why should I shoot another round!
Cuz He's not smart..why?..cuz he burried his C.d. juss ta say its underground!
I feel like Ashton kutcher.......cuz Im punkin this lame.
Bitch i jus merked ya wack ass now quit tha rap game.
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uppin for votes~~~~ tight spits but hey may the best shit sell
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yeahh upppin lets get some votes in here ..........
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uppin........lalalalalalalalalalalalalalala/.,,,,,,,,,,,
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damn nobody wants to vote in here whats wrong with this site i thought it was hot in heeere guess i was wrong
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join a league youll get vote anyways upp..............
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uppin............................................. .....
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damn cant explain this shit but i guess people dont wanna vote here
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biter http://www.africanhiphop.com/phpbb/...ic.php?p=60061&
his first 4 lines match the 4th post down on that page^^^ |
Voted For: TEK-NIK
nice.... teknik had more slamming punches...his verse had a better flow and it was slightly better in structure...i liked the whole entertainment on there...most lines got me laffing u know...and concept was clare...tho ur opponent beat u on imagery and vocab...but unlike him u were much more at point with dissing him...u hit much more harder... err tino...ur verse was gd too but just didnt have punches hard enuff to kill teknik's....you had gd ideas on there...i liked the whole uhhh space issues..but u guess u didnt use enuff creativity to bang on teknik..and u gatta work a lil more on ur flow and structure...then u'd be better... vote HONESTLY on mine too...cos i did the same here... .:Wun:. |
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