You Don't Know (Shear Kaughn) SOMETHING FOR THE SORRY ONES
 

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Just a track i hit up earlier this evening..got home from class and was like..hmmmm i think i'll do a track..and yes yes..i know i can't sing..but i tried..

www.soundclick.com/shearkaughn

"You Don't Know"

leave feed if you please.......listen and enjoy you clowns...... :thumbup:

beat is slick

delivery and flow are hot...which explains why your lyrics suffered some...up your vocab/references in here and it'd be on another level

hook is funky and cool

I liked it.


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yea.....when i make a track its either my lyrics are dope and delivery is blah...or the other way around..i need to find a medium somehwere.....

nice beat man..quality is bad ass......delevery is good here....singing not bad...not good either tho....lyrics is nice n shit.....strong point is delevery here...

good track man

thanks up..upity up pp

Beat is sick...........

flow- fits the beat...u on some royce kinda flow shit am feelin it...first time am hearin ya shit nice am impressed.....let me know if u wanna do a track...

starts with the classic eminem white boy whooo.....i dont even know if your white so your right i dont know you....buttttttt on the track, your vocals are clear as shit, but wouldnt hurt to be turned down a smidge.....the hook is ill....video game backround suprised me but was nice......you need to pronunciate some words a lil more, but your flow is nice.....well i mean your in oyd so of course your nice butttt, ya, ive decided to leave your voice where it is, but turn your beat up....yep then it would be a banger.....

haha thanks for the feed....but naw....i'm negro american......haha but ya know, you can't tell now a days now can ya.....i swear on my life that blak magik is black.......he sounds blacker then i do

YEHHHH. this shits hot famz. nice flow. nice lyrics this shits a def banger. I'd bump this in my whip.

The production is ill. Sounds professional. The beat is fiya and the lyrics are sick

overall 8.8/10

nice shit...