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Tha Q. 06-06-06 10:25 PM

"Space Ball"...Apexx Diss...check ya boyeeee out
 
Http://www.soundclick.com/qakaprox


^Click on "Space Ball"...Apexx diss


Verses 1 & 2: Q
Hook: Q

Outro samples from the movie "Space Balls"


Concept: FUCK APEXX...



Holla atcha boyeee


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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=229537
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=229540

locknes 06-06-06 10:26 PM

no hate Q but why do u always do 2 verses its something i notice any ways im listening to this track in a sec

Shear Kaughn 06-06-06 10:30 PM

here we go yo

i like the beat.....ahhaha i was about to think that you was gona use that Shakira beat for a second...you jokster...ya got me...hahhaa
you got good flow and everying....really gettin at apexx....

keep the hot sauce comin....

Ebircs 06-06-06 10:34 PM

lol...damn man....

no doubt, this was nice...i was gona use this beat b4....I know me saying an't gona mean shit but honestly i think Q ate apexx on this shit man.....nice punches and shit and the alien shit was mega funny [even tho i believe some of that shit too] .. the emotion on this one was nice as hell...flow was hot too man...."those that can't do teach" was nice..armine line was good too....the mixing and all that was sick too man....

dude went the fuck off here LOL

Tha Q. 06-06-06 10:35 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by locknes
no hate Q but why do u always do 2 verses its something i notice any ways im listening to this track in a sec



because 3 verses are reserved for my real songs, the ones I'd put on an album...Plus, I think 2 verses is a good length for a track.








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BigTony.Self 06-06-06 11:05 PM

yea shit was pretty much fiya no doubt alltho for some reason mixing didn t seem as crisp as usual hmmm maybe its me or maybe u rushed it but i can tell this is small battle in a large war

Key... 06-06-06 11:51 PM

Damn....beat is sick as fuck.........

flow was amazing, this was one of the best comeback...i heard on RV

seriously..

chorus- latex apex..loooooooooooooooooooooooool funny shit b...

am lovin this track..

Jay Rose 06-07-06 12:18 AM

k you come in a lil loud....got that respond in a ny min....quality is a lil slackin....flow is sick from the start....the voice drop had me chuckle. flow is way better then his was....lyrics are at the same so far....hook is even filled with multi's its pretty sick and catchy, "kicked out of oyd?" fa real?....haha man affection.....true, he does have alot of dudes on his jock......just by flow alone i like this one better then apex's shit, but i also didnt think apex did the best to his ability, his was longer....but this was concise and to the point....round one goes to Q, cuz apex didnt come with what he should have....both good drops, this one just seemed to be better....up that quality, and its illness.....


changeing his to apex so yall can know who im talking bout there so it doesnt get confusing

Tha Q. 06-07-06 01:30 AM

^^preciate da feed homeboy












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Triple_N 06-07-06 01:41 AM

wow...ya voice comin right in, damn almost aint recognize it was u..been so long since I listened to you...ok intro was unnecessary an sounded exceedingly wack..shoulda jus let beat play....riding the snares a lil too abrupt...not liking how ya rhyme words is ending so abruptly, sounds like u wrote this to a slower beat then switched beats...ya delivery is better than I remember...but still sorely lacks any personality...it fluctuates but it doesn't come across right..cant really elaborate...hook was ah'ight again it was a unnecessary plug an didn't really fit wit the verses...lmao@ u mentioning me...anyways..lyrically you have the idea but execute it poorly...u jus bluntantly say shit...like instead u dissing apexx u tell a story about him...examples: "u think JFK was shot by elvis u dumb as shit?" HOW IS THAT A DISS? a difference of opinion is a punchline? " job u got none?" again wheres the punch? "ya flow kept stalling like teamone"...first line that was even remotely insulting..."real estate, you real or fake?"<--was that a diss on his age?<--u had the setup then spit sum nonsense where a punch should be. u bluntly call him a pedofile wit no punch..."got kicked outta OYD for being wack?" are u kidding me?..where is the punch!!!?...lyrically it was u bragging wit a few "references" to apexx u never actually dissing him...it was like u put a conversation or should I say a monologue "influenced" by apexx over a beat...this would be insulting in a conversation but its wack in a diss track...stylistically u was alil stronger than pexx but lyrically u had absolutely nothing to offer...an ya intro & hook took away from the track as far as for bumpage purposes IMO. Both yall had decent to lackluster drops not wack but nothing to fret over neither. step it up...for all the shit ya toss at each other in LL I wanted MORE!

Tha Q. 06-07-06 01:51 AM

^^^I appreciate the elaborate feed...but, I really don't take much of what you say about my disses with a grain of salt...

#1...If my style of dissing is so ineffective, then why would 16 bars provoke Apexx to drop a 4+ minute diss track?

Preemptive Strike did that...

#2...My style of writin disses is different from yours...Ill Gramm even said that...my style is wy harder than yours triple...So, all this "it doesn't hit" is bull shit...

#3...Before you and anyone else come in here on my nuts like "Q, STFU, you can't accept criticism"...Yea I can...Im jus bein assertive about it cuz I know WTF I'm doin...

I can piss people off wit my lyrics and THAT = SUCCESS in writing it.

Nuff said.

Triple_N 06-07-06 02:15 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Tha Q.
^^^I appreciate the elaborate feed...but, I really don't take much of what you say about my disses with a grain of salt...

^^^if that was the case post would have stopped there

#1...If my style of dissing is so ineffective, then why would 16 bars provoke Apexx to drop a 4+ minute diss track?

Preemptive Strike did that...

^^^I'm not apexx, so I have no idea why he did, unless your him don't assume you know either.

#2...My style of writin disses is different from yours...Ill Gramm even said that...my style is wy harder than yours triple...So, all this "it doesn't hit" is bull shit...

^^^whats wit u always using Ill Gram as a reference?lol...ok the rest of the relevant hip hop world would agree that "personal" punchlines, punchlines, wordplay, an metas makes a good diss...this was established way before you, I, or Ill Gram every touched a mic...so your telling me Ill gram's word has authority over the rest of hip hop?WOW

#3...Before you and anyone else come in here on my nuts like "Q, STFU, you can't accept criticism"...Yea I can...Im jus bein assertive about it cuz I know WTF I'm doin...

I can piss people off wit my lyrics and THAT = SUCCESS in writing it.

^^^I am not telling you to STFU..this is your song, an your rap style...your free to do whatever u want with it...I jus gave my honest completely unbiased opinion, which is what feedback is for...you'll be fighting a neverending battle if every opinion u disagree with u react to like this.

Nuff said.



But hey do what you do........1

∆ P E X X 06-07-06 03:56 AM

lmao, oh boy @ the thick stacks of bullshit.

got kicked outta OYD = NEEEVVVVVEEERRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR happened, AND I got asked back twice lmao so you're obviously makin that shit up FAKE!!!

some shit about something you said I told you two years ago about some shit 10 years ago?? I didn't even know you 2 years ago so FAKE!!!

Said I had sex with a minor?? FAKE!!!!

"conehead"? oh yeah..that was the supposed "diss" you put out that not one single person agreed with lmao FAKE!!!

here you go saying I'm not fat: http://community.rapverse.com/showt...at.#post2744724

^^yet...in this rhyme where you're hard up as fuck for some material, you say I'm fat. Are you fuckin serious???? Sayin I'm fat, dog are you for real???!!!!! That's like saying you're straight. FAKE!!!

^there go your 5 uhh....would-be "personals":rolleyes:


Oh yeah here's your feedback:

your flow is as redundant and as run on as ever you still sound like a cheap knock-off biggie smalls as always, which is a disgrace to biggie. You can't formulate or throw a punch to save your life as usual, and your "disses" aren't "disses" they're just blabber that goes nowhere. you sound the exact same on every song, just saying differnet shit, nothing new here and conicidentlaly nothing true here either.

At least your quality doesn't suck <---stretching to find the "silver lining".

hmm.. yeah originality points for "gaypexx" and "latex" that's complex rhymin at it's best, looks like those 7 years you spent rappin on the internet has finally paid off. lol.

you'll get the hang of it someday. try starting with the basics like writing a hook that's at least appealing.


try again man. I say in 1 rhyme what takes you 3.

Tha Q. 06-07-06 08:29 AM

keep em comin

errrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr up






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Jay Rose 06-07-06 10:31 AM

no offense to apexx or nothing, but none of that was really feed, just a defense.....and if the feeling is necissary to put up a defense, then uhh, obvioulsy it hit him a lil harder then he would like to admit.....


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