***RV DISS*** Did you Get Dissed???***
 

RV DISS



Beat: some grimey shit
1st verse: ChoKahn
hook: J.Summers
2nd verse: TitoBronsky
hook: J.Summers
3rd verse: Jay286


Juss gettin shit off our chests. :shoot: We takin shots at a few kats who gettin involved in shit they got no business stickin they noses in. :thumbup:


Enjoi


links:

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=229729

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=229663

i like this beat, good choice

chokahn, flow is cool, adlibs are way off... rhyme scheme is very predictable and boring, flow falls off at times aswell and sounds worse cos of libs, lyrics are ok, delivery is lacking.... this hook is fuckin terrible, tito.. flow is better, adlibs are lined up proper but too loud, delivery is better aswell, lyrics wise nothing grabbed me though, dnt like the hook, jay, flow is ok, that "wrecklace" rhyme sounded soooo awkward and forced bitches and kitten doesnt rhyme.

meh it was ok, nothing special though.

i just meant youll be a laughing stock like her.....dont read too much into it

im not disputing the line, im jus sayin, u ended the line before with "bitches" then the second with "kitten" and they dont rhyme

Preciate the feed leady.... please keep the conversation to a minimum in this thread though.....


thanx

first verse; not bad, not your best, flow is not bad, lyrics are simple, adlibs are not good
Hook: really bad
Second:really good, love your voice, nice flow
hook: bad bad bad
third: best verse in the track, voice is dope, delivery is cool, nice one

overall not bad, just fix the hook

First verse is garbage, nothing special nothing that mind blowing just absolute generic bullshit with nothing original at all. Vocals sound weird, allmost gay, but i spose that would be a compliment to OYD :thumbup:
Quality is ok, but meh, fuck'a quality dude sucked.

Hook, NO! Its wack, J summers is a ok emcee but wtf @ this hook.

second verse is ok, but again very generic and nothing original at all. Boring as fuck. Obviously better than first verse, btu still nothing dope in this

Hook, well what can i say? NO!

Last verse is the only enjoyable verse, guy came strong with it and actually brought somthing dope to this track.

overall absolute boring diss, you guys are too involved in RV.
But mind you...
"were not RV" BUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH

lol...@ that................

i'm not gotta break the whole entire thing down becase that'll take to long and i want to go to TJmaxx and shop for curtains.....but this was real nice...all emcees came correct....hook was alright to me....solid.......i'm the jugganaut bitch...

this is a cool track...the beat is tight...totally nice....all uh y'all had nice flows BUT chokhan to me went off at some points but ugh he was gd there.....lyrics were pretty decent too from all 3...nice nice...nothingelse to say!

wun

preciate the feed yall


see YSDAT..... was that so hard????

valid feed will not be delted... even if its hate......



:thumbup:

first verse is cool flows cool delivery is cool too dont unsderstand how ppl hatin on u....hooks cool jus needs to be mixed better .tito flows cool lol @ the seaman line deliverys cool gud shit....hook again yea it coulda been better....last verse is cool proly the best flow but tito aint to far behind him nice diss .....gud shit...

^^^ leady just calling shit how he sees it, and i see where he is coming from...don't completely agree but i see his points...on the other hand, Ysdat is just bitched up about board arguments and seen a opportunity so decided to talk trash.....thats wusup w feed for my verse as i see it, can't speak for others.

verse dude blew... i like the chorus.. second cat be G, adlibs kick good... next guy decent... over all didn't hit very hard

I like how textcees comment on people's songs when they've never dropped a track, EVER.

beat works

Cho...like what u said more than how u said it...You're getting lazy with your flow...You need to elevate it.

Hook: J Summer...u need to stay off the fuckin drugs bro...this hook was ass

Tito: love ur rhyming/flow...But, dawg, you gonna have to stop using "faggot" in your raps, esp. since u have a gay guy (me) in your crew.

Jay: verse a tad too compressed...Your flow/delivery was clean tho...


decent fellas


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