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KempoMRK 06-11-06 09:56 AM

16. Chris Stylez (5-6) vs 17. Makaveli Trained (1-1)
 


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TonyTone 06-11-06 10:18 PM

let's go 12.

pz.

TonyTone 06-11-06 10:58 PM

How the fuck are u ranked above me? No matter, peep predictions

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...t=203723&page=1

Containing My Flow is simply not possible, so don’t try it
But ^^^ that’s ironic as shit
Cuz I’ll be Damned if I ever end up w/ a rec of 5-6
Better fit washin dishes, you’ll be the slave gettin whipped
CS is the ish, don't get ya hopes up
............i'm talkin bout Crhyme Sindicate
Didn’t we already battle? CS got the win cuz yal some wimps
What can u expect when ur lines are stretched as THIS!!!
Damn! My flow is wicked, I’ll admit, ya got a sexy lil chick
The problem is.......
I can’t tell what direction that cross-eyed bitch is lookin
This nigga wreakin, Chris....stick to topicals, ya not dissin
When i cop the shotty
............ya creativity won’t be the only thing missin
Peep my check in, you can see I keyed this, what I mean is
You’re worth about an hour in my life, in other words......
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Your Meaningless. Peace Bitch :thumbup:

TonyTone 06-12-06 08:18 PM

Sorry bout the edit, i had to fix the link
and chris, drop early if u can so we can get more votes

TonyTone 06-13-06 11:49 PM

u better not hoe show

Chris Stylez 06-14-06 12:41 PM

This nigga talk shit like he really known that well
.................How you claim to be poppin shotty's??
When your check-ins revolve around going with 12???
When my rips stretched, it nothin but sick loogies I spit
You should search better for my old links as props
Cuz in text battles, those the only ones you'll ever gonna get
I bang dimes as my bitches, you just pay dimes for the show
Kid you can't talk about none of my old bitches and hoes
.................Specialy when your current one looks like Spul
Nigga I been In b-more, outside ya friends you aint known in town
I slay niggas will lyrical swords in Maryland, makin trained bitches get down
Cuz im like King Arthur in this Battle, Nigga im the leader of the Round



Check his myspace pics for da Spul line...You'll see get to see what Spul would look like with long hair

TonyTone 06-14-06 02:27 PM

wtf is up w/ that structure? i said 12 lines, not 10....or was that 12? wtf

Ace Heratoga 06-14-06 02:43 PM

Better fit washin dishes, you’ll be the slave gettin whipped
CS is the ish, don't get ya hopes up
............i'm talkin bout Crhyme Sindicate

vs

Kid you can't talk about none of my old bitches and hoes
.................Specialy when your current one looks like Spul

Ok this was mad weak... you both had lines that worked AGAINST you.

Mak, the shotty/creativity line was garbage, period. If your gonna do a 'violent' punchline pleeeassee be a little more creative. Personally I think you do the 3 line steeze all wrong, but thats just me, keep doing your thing.

Chris... wtf @ the king arthur line, just, W T F?? How can you even think thats an acceptable line. The spul line was funny as shit, but I havn't been here that long so I dunno if its played or whatever.

The ONLY reason I'm voting for Mak is because there's no other choice lol. His was a bit more 'battle' oriented I guess you could say. You both need to step it up.

Vote - Mak

TonyTone 06-14-06 03:40 PM

lol thanx for votin

upp

Ghost W. Riter 06-14-06 06:13 PM

Better fit washin dishes, you’ll be the slave gettin whipped
CS is the ish, don't get ya hopes up
............i'm talkin bout Crhyme Sindicate
Peep my check in, you can see I keyed this, what I mean is
You’re worth about an hour in my life, in other words......
.
.
.
.
Your Meaningless. Peace Bitch

vs.

I bang dimes as my bitches, you just pay dimes for the show
Kid you can't talk about none of my old bitches and hoes
.................Specialy when your current one looks like Spul


\/-mak

E.C 06-15-06 02:53 PM

Better fit washin dishes, you’ll be the slave gettin whipped
CS is the ish, don't get ya hopes up
............i'm talkin bout Crhyme Sindicate

vs. nuthin.

v/ mak.

proper weak battle...

Butler 06-15-06 06:07 PM

this battle wasn't too spectacular. both of yall got the punch idea down, ya just gotta make it clever.. its like yall were just statin facts, rather than forming it into something funny, hurtful or w/ever...

with that said, mak had alittle more "hurt" in his verse..

v - mak

Nasdeey 06-15-06 09:20 PM

But ^^^ that’s ironic as shit
Cuz I’ll be Damned if I ever end up w/ a rec of 5-6
Better fit washin dishes, you’ll be the slave gettin whipped
CS is the ish, don't get ya hopes up
............i'm talkin bout Crhyme Sindicate

vs.

nothin 2 much

vote: Mak (better structure, personals)

TonyTone 06-15-06 09:50 PM

i was wonderin if anyone even understood my opener cuz i've had 3 ppl pm me asking me to explain it lol

thanx for the votes everyone

~Luciano~ 06-16-06 02:51 PM

V/Mak

for comming less wack....ya gone have 2 up the Anti


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