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Speats 06-11-06 10:45 PM

The Blade That Would'nt Cut(My best one)only one verse
 
Beat made by : Full Effect Productions, the dude is ill damn, go get some beats from him
only one verse but meh its for that provocative tourny


http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pag...m?bandID=454969
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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=229734
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2767697

Speats 06-11-06 10:54 PM

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Past Tense 06-11-06 11:07 PM

alllright i'm listen as i type

The beat is pretty hot...the mixing on the beat is perfect..it sounds professional

your quality has got 1000 times better


your flow aint too bad you def. got better since the last I heard u....

I like the echo effect u put on ur vocals......

Your lyrics are good and ur delivery is good.....but ur emotion u gotta buck up a lil bit...and then it'd be like 100 times better

this is pretty hot tho no doubt....

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Speats 06-11-06 11:14 PM

word man thanks alot

mR iKiLL. 06-11-06 11:34 PM

This is a hot beat. It flowed pretty well,sometimes it seemed a bit forced.
Some decent lyrics,nice echo ..

Like Tense said,once u get some emotion,it'll be alot better.

Speats 06-12-06 07:30 AM

thanks man.....

Speats 06-12-06 04:39 PM

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Speats 06-13-06 05:25 PM

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B To The D 06-13-06 06:15 PM

I love this beat....

Aight,Flows 100% better,still needs a lil work lil choppy but mad better....Pronunciation needs a lil work,but thats like me,the accent....I like quality real nice and the echo effect how you do that?...Real nice,deliverys better seems more confident w/ your presence....Lyrics were nice

Koo shit...should have made it to a full track..feelin it

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RTF On My "Welcome To N.C"

Speats 06-13-06 11:16 PM

word thanks, i will

Speats 06-17-06 11:51 AM

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B. Magik 06-17-06 12:32 PM

Listening..

Damn, I'm feeling this beat..It has a really deep haunting melody..You come in nice..You sound scary man, Delivery is great. Flow is meh, on and off, slips a few places but nothing too too bad..Overall man, I like it. You've elevated alot.

Dope track and shiiiiiiiit :)

Speats 06-17-06 02:45 PM

yessiirrrrrrrrr

Speats 06-18-06 12:00 PM

uppin one mnore time

Phluent 06-18-06 02:52 PM

http://www.rapverse.com/community/s...ad.php?t=229687

hit that up

i love this beat already from the intro. shit sounds raw. i like how you echo'd the last words. that shit was hard. flow is on point. i aint feelin your accent. but i cant criticize you on that. gawd damn i love this beat. i liked the closer line. your quality is good, but you sound like have a lisp or you spit when you talk.

this was real good shit though duke. delivery was on point as well. nothin to criticize


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