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KempoMRK 06-18-06 08:10 AM

31. Raw King (1-3) vs 32. SlicKnife (1-1)
 


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The Creator 06-19-06 11:43 AM

check in...I might drop late cuz I got a really bizzy week at the rifle range this weekend but I'll try and remember to drop something.

SlicKnife 06-19-06 06:14 PM

Are you after an extension or what....?

And make this 12 lines


http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=230189
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=230196
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=230195
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=230198

The Creator 06-19-06 06:26 PM

cool wit 12. and I probably am gonna need one cuz all day tues and wednesday Im gonna be really bizzy on thurs and fri I gotta hit the range. but I'll try to drop by 2morrow afternoon if I find the time dawg...

SlicKnife 06-21-06 07:26 PM

Since youve not posted either, make sure you have your verse posted sometime Friday...thats a 1 day extension - Im busy these days so thats cool with me too

The Creator 06-22-06 05:54 PM

Man…Iv seen ur work, so u beating me is like Christ wit out passion....
Quote:
Originally Posted by Mentor
i guess people would know ur dead on rv if u died...

cuz after this slaying, they'll just assume that it happened...
cuz man…I don’t leave room for accidents...I pin point wit rifles…
Slick would get destroyed on arrival…the only way he’d beat me is if he stole quotes from the bible …
Cuz Ur loses has been choreographed like a kid’s recital…I murk every one in ur age bracket….
This kids a fag…that’s probably why he leans to the side when u put em in a str8 jacket…
Cuz He’s been around since for ever…and never dropped a decent verse…
I’ll put u in the seasoned earth….the only way ud spit…is if ur mouth is bleeding first….
U neaten smirk…just brush the blood off ur face and continue…
Cuz unless I stick my foot up ur ass…then I doubt ud ever have it in u…
So get a handle, u lose ur grip and get ate like kids launches
Id type my words in brail then cough on em just so u could feel some sick punches…

well, thats my 12. thanks for the extension dawg.

SlicKnife 06-23-06 09:57 PM

Fucking weak bitch

I thought you were improving, but realised your worst is still due...
So if your one to look out for...its ‘cause we all wanna be the first to kill you
Fuck this battle, your wack son – n gay, don’t even try to fake...
& how the fuck are you a king...when royal just be the guy you date???
Crude but its true n your name isn’t confusing the truth...
‘Cause your raw...in the sense we’ve unearthed the biggest ever loser in you
1-3......!!! how bad is that, just leave this place your whole style is old
‘cause you’ll get less credit on this site than my fucking broken mobile phone
But then you got your soundclick, must be building up that rep too...
‘cause yeh its smashing...not that accomplishment but your fucking head soon
I’m serious, your not dope at all...while I’m just a raw soldier
I was thinking of running away with the win...
.................................................. but then I realised your just a walkover!!!!

Gopha 06-24-06 12:55 AM

Fuck this battle, your wack son – n gay, don’t even try to fake...
& how the fuck are you a king...when royal just be the guy you date???
But then you got your soundclick, must be building up that rep too...
‘cause yeh its smashing...not that accomplishment but your fucking head soon

I’m serious, your not dope at all...while I’m just a raw soldier
I was thinking of running away with the win...
.................................................. but then I realised your just a walkover!!!!
^^^even though I thought it could have been worded better,tha concept was dope

Vs.

Cuz Ur loses has been choreographed like a kid’s recital…I murk every one in ur age bracket….
This kids a fag…that’s probably why he leans to the side when u put em in a str8 jacket…

Slic got this pretty clearly IMO, not bad Raw King, some lines felt a lil too fillerish, and the brail/feel lines are sssssoooooooo played

vote- SlicKnife

SlicKnife 06-24-06 09:49 AM

Good lookin 1-0......

Keep votin

Nasdeey 06-24-06 10:21 AM

Raw King

Cuz unless I stick my foot up ur ass…then I doubt ud ever have it in u…
So get a handle, u lose ur grip and get ate like kids launches
Id type my words in brail then cough on em just so u could feel some sick punches…

stand out bars

not really a good structure you punches was there but some of em are popular
choppy flow...no personals

vs.

SlicKnife


Crude but its true n your name isn’t confusing the truth...
‘Cause your raw...in the sense we’ve unearthed the biggest ever loser in you
nice

But then you got your soundclick, must be building up that rep too...
‘cause yeh its smashing...not that accomplishment but your fucking head soon
good personal

nice verse overall, personal punches wordplay an actual battle verse

vote: SlicKnife (this was one sided)

So.Rell 06-24-06 11:25 AM

Cuz Ur loses has been choreographed like a kid’s recital…I murk every one in ur age bracket….
This kids a fag…that’s probably why he leans to the side when u put em in a str8 jacket…

vs.

But then you got your soundclick, must be building up that rep too...
‘cause yeh its smashing...not that accomplishment but your fucking head soon
I’m serious, your not dope at all...while I’m just a raw soldier
I was thinking of running away with the win...
.................................................. but then I realised your just a walkover!!!!

Didn't like the battle but Slick came out with the W.

Vote - SlicKnife

KempoMRK 06-24-06 02:20 PM

Upping for votes.

SlicKnife 06-24-06 05:49 PM

Kempo, sign me out......for one week only, I'll be back the week after - I'm going on a school trip, n make sure my record stays the same (add that win I got for the cypher too)

thanks

KempoMRK 06-25-06 10:39 AM

SlicKnife wins 3-0.

SlicKnife wins (3-1) +1 from cypher win.
Raw King loses (1-4)


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