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Ike - Goodnight
word...im bout to drop my feedback links...so dont close this n shit...
havent dropped a track on RV in a while.....so yea... www.soundclick.com/youngike Goodnight listen closely...its a nice lil story track |
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the knife to the wrist line seemed off, but the hook was banannas...very thought provoking, deep, and well preformed....effects on it just added to the ill ass appeal of it, there are parts where the verses can be upped, honestly i say you work on that n take this to a studio n try n get it on a demo...this is the kinda hook that can get you noticed....
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I love this song
I downloaded it and i'm puttin it on my ghetto ass mp3 player :cool: the story is tight...hook is ill..verse is good..this is the dopest shit i've heard ina while on here |
Listening...
I loved this beat...I used this beat for Birds in the Metal...lmfao... Flow is nice. I'm liking it a shitload. Lyrics are deep...I'm fucking loving this track. I'm loving the hook as well...true shit true shit. And what's even better...I can relate to this track. Wow...this song is amazing man. WOOWWW at that closer. :shocked: You are one talented mu fucka. That's all I gotta say man. Amazing track. Best I've ever heard on RV, period. |
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Lol... beat is dope man, with the guitar strumming shit in the background.. dope man. Flowed on point, good shit... da fool was muthafuckin fed up!.. word :). Someone's gotta be happy somewhere, right? Right... Lyrics were good. Nice lil story here man. The hook I was feeling... niceness man.. keep it up on these tracks, foolio! Overall song is dope man... give me this beat. -_- Might do me a lil story track on it also, hoe! Keep droppin tracks... 8/10 Now gimmie your damn mic! haha, just kidding... ...no seriously, give me it. -_- |
aight....
the first verse... the reverb sounds heavy but the flow is good..the lyrics is good too and i can feel the emotion that comes wit it.. hook..i like this hook it sounds good man... 2nd verse.. the flow is still on point and everything..i think the second verse is betta then the first verse IMO.. Hook again... 3rd verse..flow is still on point and everything..the emotion is real good yo i can feel it i can really pick up on how u wanted it to feel and everything.. I like this track man its real nice..i like the beat too it fits the concept of the whole song perfect to me man..good job.. can u hit this up and leave some feed man... http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=230364 |
^ favor has been returned....thanks for the feed people
and i just uploaded a louder version...the one i had was a bit low |
intro is niiice
1st verse comes in nicely. mayne i can really relate to this. i dont know about me goin emo n shit takin a knife to my wrist but i'm really feelin this track. delivery is good, lyrics are deep....nice emotion. i dunno if you produced this or not but it's good none the less. hook is raw as fuck. ya know, there's really nothin i dont like about this, seriously. i'm likin the little voice samples n shit too. i gotta download this.....pz |
hey think you could RTF - http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=230479
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Good beat choice man, I loved the shit LE did to it as well. Your intro was kinda weird, I disliked the echo type you gave it man. But when you start rappin it was ill fa sure, You had a insanely good emotion. You delivered nice a meaningful also with deadly lyrics. The story was appealing to me, it had a solid influence to it. Good job man.
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feed has been left...dope shit... uppin to the fuckin top |
always great with the topical tracks, definetly a dope ass track, period |
Returning the feed
Playing..... these guitar rifs remind me of a ben harper track. Intro vocals are cool, dubs on it are a good effect, production and quality are fucking solid!! Emotion is solid, flows on point, lyrics and content are nice. hook's solid bro, this entire track is deep as fuck, feeling it!!! Feeling the concept of her writing back bro..... your a fucking beast bro!! Solid track. |
beats not really my type of thing...but i'm feeling it...
intro is cool so far...beat kicks in real nice man, like the mellow vibe here...u come in way nice...maybe a tad loud...rhymes r tightness, flow is hot, kinda like where ur gooing so far, wow, heavy man...diddnt see that coming...hook comes in hot, think it's to loud tho....got my noddin my head though, ohh sample is sickness yo, damn bro....deepness here n shit, some mood altering shit !....like it a lot..your delevery is great here man, emotion is flawless, liked this a lot man....your deff one of my fav rappers on RV manyou been on some mushy shit..lol...I like this one a lot though, seriously |
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