31. Raw King (1-4) vs 32. T.r.oo.P (1-3)
 

Im here....

Its time 2 get focused

check....are u troop or lucky? make up ur mind dawg..lol...u wanna drop 14 lines by 2morrow?

Well its 2 dayz later..lol

but im droppin 14 later on.......

king?naw u tha queen of rappin notice as im racking this Murking
ill give u 2 slaps & you wont HitBacks like an Inaccurate Burping
ya styles tired cuz im standing ontop and infront of your stamina
ya punches crappy u couldnt snap me if i was infront your camera
ill put you wit a coughin if you sick or not cuz AI run it like bosses
this bitches soundclick link stretches... out further than his losses
"WE still clapping ni99az like std's?"...dude who's been in ya crew?
Your styles..Punches..and record like frizbee's.....they been threw
i did the mathematics and 99% of ya shit is sum garbage trackage
how the fuck yo style raw when it aint never been out the package
i mean do the math all ya shit is ass and im known to smack ah butt
I kno we agreed to 14
But you suck so much ima stop here and give u 2 lines to catchup
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*Nuff Said*

I'll drop in a few.......

1 % of your shit isnt a garbage track, try to make the 1% into here. IN THE MEAN TIME VOTE ON MY MOTHER FUCKING BATTTLE

is that all u got?..pfft...dawg, u nothing like a criminal.....................
..................... trying to hurt wit hugs/
cuz I dont care where u from...............
.....................but I'll still beat u to death wit a "dirty glove/
cus man, ur weak metaphores are better stored benieth the desert floor....
cuz belieave me, u dried up/
put u down like u was sportin cement drous, then lay u face down....................
just cuz the box says "this side up"/
cuz luck...u could get choked in ways that'll have u caughin blood like smoke grenades/
cuz u state u interested in war............
....................but u only rolling wit a swiss army knife with a broken blade/..lol
and man, fuck AI, its old as hell, and no one supports the banner/

but then I'll lay u next to em 5 minutes after/
so keep thinking u the shit, till ur sights get fluched drout/
cuz u wrote 12 and quit..................
.....................but by ur 1st post on the thread, u shouldve already walked the out/
cuz Im here to save the game....cuz u got it hanging by a thread in ur sigs/
AI would try and vote on this....but the DickRider's aint small enough to find the head of ur dick/
cuz I get brain in the whip wit the big body frame.......
while Lucy just..............


good luck dawg u had a str8 verse.

this section of the explination is for people that need it. if u dont want to read it then dont.

dirty glove is wat he has on his from section. on his interest section he put down "war". and the only item he has for the mini rapper is a broken swiss army knife or some shit.*Standing By My Dieing Comrads Hospital Bed* is some shit he wrote for a topical battle. he got the game on his sig. *Sits at My Kitchen Table...counting change* is from another topical battle he did.

lol @ explaining votes

and inserting shit from my Topicals lol

im glad u kno my shit by heart

but inserting quotes into ya shit is old

but str8

ill put you wit a coughin if you sick or not cuz AI run it like bosses
this bitches soundclick link stretches... out further than his losses
"WE still clapping ni99az like std's?"...dude who's been in ya crew?
Your styles..Punches..and record like frizbee's.....they been threw

Vs

cuz Im here to save the game....cuz u got it hanging by a thread in ur sigs/
AI would try and vote on this....but the DickRider's aint small enough to find the head of ur dick/

V/troop.....he came wit better punchs and personals also structure...raw your verse was weak wit nuthin special

1-0..................

king?naw u tha queen of rappin notice as im racking this Murking
ill give u 2 slaps & you wont HitBacks like an Inaccurate Burping
LMAO I DIG THIS TROOP
ill put you wit a coughin if you sick or not cuz AI run it like bosses
this bitches soundclick link stretches... out further than his losses
did the mathematics and 99% of ya shit is sum garbage trackage
how the fuck yo style raw when it aint never been out the package
NICE

VS


is that all u got?..pfft...dawg, u nothing like a criminal.....................
..................... trying to hurt wit hugs/
cuz I dont care where u from...............
.....................but I'll still beat u to death wit a "dirty glove/

DOG PLEASE DONT CONFUSE THIS AS HATE BUT, YOUR STRUCTURE STYLE IS ALMOST UNBEARABLE TO READ THRU, MAKES IT HARD TO REALIZE WHERE THE PUNCH ENDS AND WHEN THE NEXT LINE BEGINS, I WOULD FOCUS ON DOING SOME STRUCTURE CHANGES AND FORMATTING YOUR PUNCHES BETTER, ALSO IF YOU NEED TO EXPLAIN, LIMIT IT AS MUCH AS YOU CAN, NEVER DROP PARAGRAPH EXPLAINATIONS
GET READ OF THE "'S AND EXTRA STUFF THAT JUST CLUTTERS YOUR VERSE
AND THEN FOCUS ON DROPPING CLEAR VERSES ON YUOUR OPPONANT
BUT KEEP YOUR HEAD UP
V/ TROOP

yeah cut out the fucking dots and ill read yours

2-0......................

I think somebody is elevateing?

thanks for the feed back dawg...Im just use to writing like that but I'll see wat I can do about it.