"Someday"
 

http://www.soundclick.com/qakaprox



^Click on "Someday"



Concept: I'm not sure what genre I was aiming for, but I'm just expressing feelings through a mixture of rap and poetry to a non-traditional rap beat.


Holla


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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=230530
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=230479

Listening...damn this beat is real fam...a great beat and original for a rap song...damn fam this is the best song Ive heard on RV..damn..Im a sucker fo this shit..damn lol..hook is real dope too..damn I can't even feed on this..ill try, flow is great, delivery is too..and lyrics..DAMN thats like the 10th time i said DAMN...shit this is my type of tracks...10/10 - never said that before..this was the best track Ive heard on RV and my favourite from you

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=230603

can you rtf

^^yea...preciate it...nothing major tho man...I was jus experimenting with this track
nah mean

stretching my range




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not that bad of track you got here Q ballz.....

i like the rock feel of the track......your flow is on like usual..good delivery........
the hook is nice to.......looks like you put some work into this little track ya got here

this is a solid track.....solid like rock......booyakasha

Damn this is touching man. Your lyrics are so great, a very insane flow with it to. This acoustic beat is ill as well. The hook you did, I'm not sure but it sounds like 2 seperate voices but anyway it's catchy and soothing. The whole consept of this song was good, nice tune to download man. Nice job with this man, I kinda wish it was longer lol but I could always keep pressing play. overall good job Q, but yo get a better name Q seems femaleish;)

rtf here: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=230629

Q seems female-ish? how's that?...Anyway...appreciate the feed








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eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeer up







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this sing wudda been a decent rounded track if it werent 4 the completely off key singin on the chorus,i used 2 sing a lil, and sorry bro but its just off... its jus out of pitch and dont fit, the actual rapping is all good, no real critique points....except maybe a slightly softer delivery wudda worked in places..beat is really un-rap but u rock it very well, holding ur flow well without the snare/bass well...okay track, needs polishing tho...

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aiight beat sound like some real feel good shit. lookin' thru world thru glass stone line was nice.

flow is pretty dope. Looks like your quality got upped a lil. lyrics tight. I struck out for you. damn nice. multi's nice. like the hook. your adlibs good. should be upped. lol you sound like NaS a lil on this one voice wise. especially on that hook.

but uhh second verse good too. damn this nice. damn the part where you like I got the call, and I regret the shit i did or something like that. was tight.

damn man I really enjoyed this. nice lil track here. 9/10 stay up

RTF plz:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=230662

EZ

Awww...come on man...I've listened to this track 100000 times...and, my singing isn't all off key

boooooooooooo




SPUL...I'm at the library right now...I'll RTF when I get home


preciate the feed yall


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Listening..

OMFG man, Give me this fucking beat. Now. You come in real nice, emotion, delivery, everything..Flow is flawless..I lovvvvvvve the sample in the hook..This is the hottest shit Ive heard in a while dude..Lyrics are deep and meaningful, everything is good.

haaaa....the sample in the hook is ME!!!!



Holla



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Oh shit son! That's what I thought at first, but I wasn't sure and I didnt want to make an ass of myself, but it seems that it's too late for that :(

no doubt


I'll rtf tho








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...hmm this is an actual song...most people who post on here just post like...iono just nothingness.....with no substance...this has mad substance...I really like this.....you did good without the drums.....this didn't really seem like it would be arap song..more of a pop song....but its pretty good.....the singing on the hook is pretty good......the lyrics were deep...this overall was a good SONG not.....just like nothingness......good shit here Q...