Konvict - Goodbye (Real deep song dedicated to my ex, damn shit is fucked up)
 

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dope shit man....only thing i didnt really like was the sampled hook...it was kinda low...

i think you shoulda added your own lil hook in it.....if it woulda been a lil higher in volume it woulda been aright.

overall this is some dope shit man....ima take another listen. props on this

beat is good

flow is good

lyrics didn't connect to pull off anything profound...but were okay

pretty solid soundin track


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Listening...

Beat is pretty nice, i like it...

Content was pretty good, now that i hear the hook i have this beat, lol , you speeded it up, you could have done it to the slower one because it might fit, unless you tried that... lol but otherwise the hook is low and maybe add something to it to make it your on.

Second verse is pretty good, i like it better than the first seems a little more emotion because your just going off on it.....so far it's pretty good nothing i can really find cept for maybe you can up some emotion into it and add a little more presense but otherwise

nice track..

you sound like mase kind of...

LMAO are you insulting him?

LOL whattt yeah Ive got the Mase/Fab/Loon thing bout 2000 times so yeah I guess. lol..but thanks yall...

yeah actually now that you mention it you do sound more like loon than mase... i dont hear the fab thing though...

Yeah listen to my olllllddd tracks back in the day it aint even on my sc lol...but yeah if u ask dudes from that time shit is like dat..but yo cud u leave sum feed on the song if u got time nah mean so i cud see whats good?..

I like how you put all ya raw emotions into this joint, it was present in your tone as well. Beat was coo but should've either got rid of the sampled hook or put the volume up there because it was too low and you talkin over it didn't help.

The flow was on point throughout the entire track, had good presence on the mic as well, suited for this type of track. I aint gonna get into the lyrics that much because Lindsey is my girl ya kno...but I can see where you comin from...rawness!

Aigh

Verse 1:
Flows dope,feelin the lyrics man...real deep,real shit...i know what you goin through cause you told me....real nice,deliverys dope...emotions nice..i can tell its from the heart man....word this is a dope verse,presence is dope

Hook,i dont like the sampled thing...sounds weird...but its koo

Verse 2: Word..this is better than the first,feelin the lyrics feelin the delivery,real nice lyrics,presence is dope...real dope lyrics man,painful shit...really feelin it...word nice shit

I like the talkin you do over the hook....

Good shit man feelin it

Thanks yall.....

Upping.........