Dear Lord
 

A few days ago something happened, that made me kind of realize what I believe, this spawn of that.

Dear Lord - Sense


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Ike - Good Night

Aight listenin..damn what beat is this?...intro is good..im feelin the singing..whoever it is..ooh ure quality is nasty lol...but i cant hit that nigga so ima continue...your flow is decent and multis are straght and the lyrics good..BUT the shit u gotta work on is the emotion, summ shit jus seem u readin nah mean...and not rlly feelin the words all the time...and hook is real nice, i like you put a spin off the oringal hook from sum1 else on a diff beat...if you had the quality this song wud be 10 times better..emotion is better on 2nd verse..but thats it:

emotion and presence thats all u gotta work on

delivery, flow, lyrics are all nice

LOL yea i've always had a problem with emotion..i have it in the first take, then something goes wrong, i leave, come back, try it again and lol i keep messing up til i get annoyed and the emotion dissapears...most of the time i'm not even reading i'm just annoyed as fuck...lol..ill work on that...

Lol word that shit happens to me too nah mean but overal shit was solid so its all good but yeah def work on that n itll be hot..1