Simply Tony B
 

www.soundclick.com/makevelitrained

feed me people, this the 1st i've done in a while
and mods dont delete this, i'll have links edited into this post




http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=230439
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=230444

*listening*



lmfao...lil jon didnt really have to be there ehhh!!!...ur quality is ughhhh mayne...i like the beat..shit is loud as hell...u got a nice flow on it...delivery needs a lil bit of word dawg..i cud barely get what u were saying...i'm just feeling the beat big time...


keep 'em coming

thanx for the feed
i just turned the beat down n uploaded it again

uppin

tony brown you blockhead!!!!!!!!

the beat is nice...good selection.......you got good prescence and good flow and everything.......only thing that needs to be upped is the quality, a little hard to understand what your saying due to it......but overall its a nice drop....just work on quality......and you'll be on your way

thanx mayne, btw just gimme a link if u want me to rtf. same for anyone else as well

uppin

uppin..........

Wake up people..

No love? damn....

*yawn*

:( .

listenin*
u dont pause enough in ya spit... shit just keeps comin, and its too much if u aint got mad multi's... and yo shit would sound doper wit some adlibs... i dig ya second verse better cuz its a lil slower.. the fad out is kinda wack though... but good shit word... ..
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return wit some feed
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=230858

iight thanx, but werd i hate pauses so i just don't lol
i'ma hit up your link right now

uppin

ewww @ the beat maN....u sound real young....delevery is nice, you sound like ur pretty confadent...flow ups a LOT here....for about 4 bars...kinda hard to hear what ur saying at some points...lyrics sound decent....i'd throw some more metas n shit in a shit talk track tho...hooks decent..i'd EQ a bit more if i was u..maby add some more lows to ur shit...best thing here was the multis witch brang the flow nice


1nE

thanks mayne, yea problem is idk how to mix so hopefully i'll learn how to do some eq'ing myself pretty soon. thanx for the feed

uppin

DAYUM at the quality. you'll get better. LOL @ the lil john shit. Oh well you'll get better this shit was aiight....

rtf

yea lol doesnt matter anymore, i just threw my old mic away n got a shure PG58 vocal mic so my quality's literally like 5 times better. thanx for the feed

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