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M&rk 07-01-06 12:47 AM

pictureperfect2- Freak Ya!!!
 
name says it all, bitches be gettin freaked to this jam.
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click on my soundclick in my sig, its the first at the top "freak ya"... get me some feed, thank
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i'll be editin in links off feed
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=230741
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=230709
feed back left^^^

TonyTone 07-01-06 04:28 PM

intro gots too much static i hope it's not just because ya quality is that bad lol
ok beat's not my type but you ride it well. some of the dubs are a lil too loud, needs a bit more emotion as well cuz it's startin to get kinda boring. hmmmm.....lyrics well for this type of track it's what i expected so not much to say about that. hook actually gots my head noddin a bit. ok 2nd verse is better, sounds like u put some more emotion forth this time. flow got a lil shaky in a couple places but besides that it's pretty much on point but i wish u would change up the rhyme scheme in some places cuz it starts getting uninteresting. not bad keep droppin

Yvonne 07-01-06 06:22 PM

*listening*


i wunt coment on the lyrics dude cos the quality is fucking poor..i can barely get what u saying..but from the lil i heard u being freaky..lyrics are the usual freak talk nothing much about it...flow was steady...beat wud have bin tighter if the quality of the whole track was better..up ur quality and u shud be waaaaaaaaaay better...the only word u said larely was 'fuck'...lol u freak!...o did i say ur flow was steady?..well u kinna turned it off towards the end...shit mayne i wud have felt this only if the quality was way damn better...lol...did u forget to click on stop after the 'you hear me?'


nice try as for me tho...

keep 'em comming...


hit my sig thanx

M&rk 07-02-06 12:34 AM

ya the quility is wacktastic, im only postin this to see if its worth doin with better... and ya the last of the second verse was a free style cuz this shit nearly 5 mins talkin about freakin, got kinda bored of writin, but yo thanx ya'll for the feed

Ysdat 07-02-06 04:36 AM

ok,playing...

mad static! intros mumbled. Beat can fuck off,not feeling it.
Ok, you know quality is fucked, so i wont dwell on that.


Lyrics are ok, nothing to amazing, nothing orginal.Flow is good,dubs are good.
You start getting a bit monotone on this, gets boring, ok now you switched it uop slighly.


yeh Im stopping, i wont put myself thru listening to anything with quality this bad.

but yeh, this track is very generic.

Wouldnt feel it even if it had better quality.

Ebircs 07-02-06 12:12 PM

idk if it's my headphones or what but..sounds like u need major hiss reduct...vocals a bit low...emotion is a bit low...delevery is not bad ....flows decent...shoulda been more hype here tho IMO, sound like ur sleepin here man, and qualitys not real great...yea man....get more hype man, best part about this was the delevery i guess


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