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14. Out Writechas (2-0) vs 15. Mercules (2-0)
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sup...how's 20?
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if i post first i'll prolly do less...
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16 like...
WWWB, PRBA, BBW, the tag tourney, AND LBL :eek: ^ and thats just leagues I've seen you sign-in as of recent writin' 5 verses a week.. n yet to drop decent you in every league i know... I'm still not one of ya readers plus..uh.. EVERYBODY you beat. I dont peep their shit either You uncontested...beat me.. you'll get props n big-ups heh.. After this you'll just get Props.... to hold ya limbs up Bitch! You honestly think you could out-diss me? i'll FLIP that shit like archives.. n' Writchas Out of history You aint equipt to face Merc.. this shits lookin gory Bitch my rep is so Firm... Lawyers ghostwrite for me 20 lines??! .. i'm impatient as fuck n you stink! like Darkman.. you'll lose ya face if you dont Wrap it up quick get the fuck from in front of me, or catch the steel chrome aimin' my 9 so Stable.. its makin' horses feel at home Boy I got my own stlye... Merc so fresh n' relative I could outright out-write Outwrite... ..n STILL not seem repeditive |
i'd make this a pic battle...but who want's to see this fool?
cuz that shit ain't picture perfect, but fuck he's a lot better than you ya shit ain't medalin' dude, my index'll put the metal in merc & then i'll plant this 15th seed and watch the bitch settle in dirt i honestly thought of postin ya pic, but shit...i didn't want you to pout & and i didn't wanna make a bitch move, cuz u really need a house u need a spouse, maybe a life and some good writing skills because ya disses are sending mixed signals like romantic novels Quote:
lmao...u recycled, it's funny how that wack verse went so drastic cuz that same recycled garbage will be used to wrap ya face in plastic u dumb fuck, it's great to see that you actually tried for this battle think this Samuri gon Cruise in this fight? to bad he died in that battle yea i rhymed the same words, but dude it's better then whut u brought cuz i brought the whole package, u carried a purse along with some lip gloss get this bitch tossed, im moving to 3-0 and that is straight fact i'd flip ur verse, but there has been nothing made to weigh wack |
uppin for some votes
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pretty decent
merc: you had a lot of wordplay shit...unfortunately, most of it didnt really hit Out...insead it was actually pretty braggadocious, and although thats cool, dissing would be a little nicer. your first 4 lines were so-so, but not really clever...just truthful. my favorites were the limbs up (too bad u recycled), wrap it u quick, and the closer. other than that, i couldnt find much quotable here...it looks like u either underestimated ur opponent or had a bad day. all i know is, you had some cool lines in general, but they werent good for a battle (i.e., lawyers, horses feel at home). ok showing out: there wasnt much great stuff, but i guess u werent going all out either. seed/dirt lines are kinda played, and the lip gloss line wasnt really much. also, you rhymed battle twice...i know u admitted that, but thats still a no no. u had an original bitch move line, but ive seen other types of that line which were flipped much better. i liked the opener, closer, and wrap ya face in plastic lines. the rest was ehh...decent tho. VOTE=OUT WRITECHAS on consistency with dissing and more clever shit |
mercule
Bitch! You honestly think you could out-diss me? i'll FLIP that shit like archives.. n' Writchas Out of history 20 lines??! .. i'm impatient as fuck n you stink! like Darkman.. you'll lose ya face if you dont Wrap it up quick get the fuck from in front of me, or catch the steel chrome aimin' my 9 so Stable.. its makin' horses feel at home vs outwrite i'd make this a pic battle...but who want's to see this fool? cuz that shit ain't picture perfect, but fuck he's a lot better than you yea i rhymed the same words, but dude it's better then whut u brought cuz i brought the whole package, u carried a purse along with some lip gloss ok battle u both have come better last week and the week before...umm i liked mercules verse alittle better..i thought outwrite had him exposing him with the recycling then the punch was okkkk...coulda damaged him...some other shit i didn't like ...samuari shit...mercules personal were better too..close vote-mercules |
I DIDNT RECYCLE!
THATS A FAKE PERSONAL! |
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lmao.............i thought i wrote that in my verse for KD last night.. nvermind lol
KEMP CLEAN THIS UP PLEASE |
You uncontested...beat me.. you'll get props n big-ups
heh.. After this you'll just get Props.... to hold ya limbs up Bitch! You honestly think you could out-diss me? i'll FLIP that shit like archives.. n' Writchas Out of history You aint equipt to face Merc.. this shits lookin gory Bitch my rep is so Firm... Lawyers ghostwrite for me 20 lines??! .. i'm impatient as fuck n you stink! like Darkman.. you'll lose ya face if you dont Wrap it up quick get the fuck from in front of me, or catch the steel chrome aimin' my 9 so Stable.. its makin' horses feel at home Boy I got my own stlye... Merc so fresh n' relative I could outright out-write Outwrite... ..n STILL not seem repeditive vs i'd make this a pic battle...but who want's to see this fool? cuz that shit ain't picture perfect, but fuck he's a lot better than you Merc took this easy...dude got nice concepts im feelin the style..outwritechas u let me down here yo u gonna have 2 come back next week..2 proove u aint fallin off v/Merc |
You uncontested...beat me.. you'll get props n big-ups
heh.. After this you'll just get Props.... to hold ya limbs up Bitch! You honestly think you could out-diss me? i'll FLIP that shit like archives.. n' Writchas Out of history get the fuck from in front of me, or catch the steel chrome aimin' my 9 so Stable.. its makin' horses feel at home Boy I got my own stlye... Merc so fresh n' relative I could outright out-write Outwrite... ..n STILL not seem repeditive VS i'd make this a pic battle...but who want's to see this fool? cuz that shit ain't picture perfect, but fuck he's a lot better than you yea i rhymed the same words, but dude it's better then whut u brought cuz i brought the whole package, u carried a purse along with some lip gloss V/ MERC |
Yeah. Merc took this battle with better quotables and consistancy. Although I think recycling is a bitch move :\. Writchas had some dope lines in his verse but he was less consistent, and had more filler than Merc. A good battle though.
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You uncontested...beat me.. you'll get props n big-ups
heh.. After this you'll just get Props.... to hold ya limbs up Bitch! You honestly think you could out-diss me? i'll FLIP that shit like archives.. n' Writchas Out of history Boy I got my own stlye... Merc so fresh n' relative I could outright out-write Outwrite... ..n STILL not seem repeditive Vs. i'd make this a pic battle...but who want's to see this fool? cuz that shit ain't picture perfect, but fuck he's a lot better than you yea i rhymed the same words, but dude it's better then whut u brought cuz i brought the whole package, u carried a purse along with some lip gloss Mercules was more consistent in his verse...Out Writechas, those two lines I quoted were good but you need more of them to win battles Vote - Mercules |
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